Life Made Her A Promise Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: ABCD AEFA GHIJ KLMN OPAA AAQA RAST UVSW VCXY| She listened to sweet melodies of love and forever | A |
| She travelled to the Astral world | B |
| She found so much joy and comfort in the art of living her body | C |
| She created the man she would love to meet | D |
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| On the fateful day she met him and he met her | A |
| The Universe supported her by creating a romantic solar system | E |
| The world was for once behaving according to her Accord | F |
| She loved the feeling of winter in the heated summer | A |
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| Every statement spoken by him was just a manifestation | G |
| Every acceptance acted by her was a surprising effect | H |
| Her Astral plane said it's him | I |
| His psyche told him it's a mare dream | J |
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| Like a dream when it sweetens the first instinct is to try to wake up | K |
| He asked for the breaking of the middle fruiting | L |
| She trusted the man she has met as her husband | M |
| After All Marriage is consummated by the two and God only blesses | N |
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| The total surrender put the good in her life | O |
| The total surrender and no sign of waking up made him confused | P |
| She thought she owned him their affair became the gospel according to her | A |
| He lost the chemistry and left her | A |
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| He woke up when he realized he is to be a Father | A |
| She loved him more when she heard someone else owned her | A |
| He officially reports to someone else | Q |
| She the main hero of the story is but a villain in love story that breeds forever | A |
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| She spends days and money trying to win him back | R |
| He spends days and money trying to be a good Father | A |
| She is his only weakness | S |
| He has her every time he is looking for fresh air | T |
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| She is losing the erection of a flower at Dawn | U |
| He is getting more powerful and influential | V |
| But life made her a promise | S |
| To have and hold him 'til their bodies frail | W |
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| Her pillow knows the story of her betrayal | V |
| Her friends find her the strongest and the most carefree | C |
| She has to travel day and night trying to run away from her mind | X |
| Life promised her life but not to be found only in one man | Y |
Inno Katz
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Poet's note: This poem was inspired by events in a friend's life where she felt betrayed by her lover who got married after they had just had a fight and she requested for a short break. Through the poem I would love to express how sweet it feels to be obsessive of something that will never be yours and suggest that life is too short to fix your eyes on closed doors. The poem helps me to understand that their is much greater power in letting go.
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