A New Promise Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: ABCDEE FFGGHH IIJJKKLM NNOOPPQR| I know the pain that burns within your heart | A |
| I know how betrayal and heartbreak hurt | B |
| I know that you should grieve away the loss | C |
| I know that I can comfort you in a time of remorse | D |
| But still morn cry grieve and release the pain | E |
| So that you will not loss your sanity and became insane | E |
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| I know I can only promise a better tomorrow | F |
| One that is less painful and has no sorrow | F |
| A new promise of happiness and love's light | G |
| A new promise of us walking in God's sight | G |
| When tomorrow is not bright we'll face it together | H |
| When darkness tries to engulf our love we'll fight either | H |
| - | |
| I know that nothing will again be the same | I |
| I know am not rich or a person of such fame | I |
| But still the little I have is enough and infinity | J |
| As long as you are by my side and love me for eternity | J |
| I promise you a better life every single day | K |
| I promise you my love for you is here to stay | K |
| I know my promises are like drops of water in an ocean | L |
| Empty and endless yet true in every sense I'll be your lean | M |
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| I know you can no longer hold on to promises of such pace | N |
| My love fears not life's brutal lace | N |
| But you are the air I breath beneath the graves | O |
| You are the wings that make me fly above the caves | O |
| Am no longer free am like a bird in a cage | P |
| I know the promises I made are a source of your rage | P |
| I promise you a new promise of ruthless death | Q |
| I promise you a new promise of all my wealth | R |
Ian Otieno Okado
(C) All Rights Reserved. Poem Submitted on 02/01/2021
Poet's note: A new promise is all about being able to have someone to help you overcome lives challenges but sometimes the promises are just words and nothing more. 1st Feb,2021 and to those who give is hope in times of need. It is great to have people who care about us but sometimes they may also fail us.
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