When I Was King Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: ABABCDCDEFEFGHGH GIGIGGGG JKJKGLGL GMGMGGGG NONOGIGI GPGPQRQR SMSMTPTP GUGUVPVP GWGWXPXP YGYGSGSG ZA2ZA2B2C2B2D2 E2F2E2F2G2H2G2H2 I2DI2DJ2PJ2P K2GK2GGPGP RGRGL2GL2G M2C2M2D2GN2GN2 GGGGO2PO2P N2GN2GP2PP2P N2QN2QO2PO2P N2N2N2N2N2H2N2H2 ZN2E2N2GQ2GQ2 R2GR2GQ2PQ2PMQ2MQ2S2 QS2QThe second time I lived on earth | A |
Was several hundred years ago | B |
And royal by my second birth | A |
I know as much as most men know | B |
I was a king who held the reins | C |
As never modern monarch can | D |
I was a king and I had brains | C |
And what was more I was a man | D |
Called to the throne in stormy times | E |
When things were at their very worst | F |
I had to fight and not with rhymes | E |
My own self and my kindred first | F |
And after that my friends and foes | G |
And great abuses born of greed | H |
And when I d fairly conquered those | G |
I ruled the land a king indeed | H |
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I found a deal of rottenness | G |
Such as in modern towns we find | I |
I camped my poor in palaces | G |
And tents upon the plain behind | I |
I marked the hovels dens and drums | G |
In that fair city by the sea | G |
And burnt the miles of wretched slums | G |
And built the homes as they should be | G |
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I stripped the baubles from the State | J |
And on the land I spent the spoil | K |
I hunted off the sullen great | J |
And to the farmers gave the soil | K |
My people were their own police | G |
My courts were free to everyone | L |
My priests were to preach love and peace | G |
My Judges to see justice done | L |
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I d studied men and studied kings | G |
No crawling cant would I allow | M |
I hated mean and paltry things | G |
As I can hate them even now | M |
A land of men I meant to see | G |
A strong and clean and noble race | G |
No subject dared kneel down to me | G |
But looked his king straight in the face | G |
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Had I not been a king in fact | N |
A king in council hall and tent | O |
I might have let them crawl and act | N |
The courtier to their heart s content | O |
But when I called on other kings | G |
And saw men kneel I felt inclined | I |
To gently tip the abject things | G |
And kick them very hard behind | I |
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My subjects were not slaves I guess | G |
But though the women in one thing | P |
A question twas of healthy dress | G |
Would dare to argue with their king | P |
I had to give in there I own | Q |
Though none denied that I was strong | R |
Yet they would hear my telephone | Q |
If anything went very wrong | R |
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I also had some poets bright | S |
Their songs were grand I will allow | M |
They were if I remember right | S |
About as bad as bards are now | M |
I had to give them best at last | T |
And let them booze and let them sing | P |
As it is now so in the past | T |
They d small respect for gods or king | P |
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I loved to wander through the streets | G |
I carried neither sword nor dirk | U |
And watch the building of my fleets | G |
And watch my artisans at work | U |
At times I would take off my coat | V |
And show them how to do a thing | P |
Till someone clucking in his throat | V |
Would stare and gasp It is the king | P |
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And I would say Shut up you fools | G |
Is it for this my towns I burn | W |
You don t know how to handle tools | G |
And by my faith you ll have to learn | W |
I was a king but what of that | X |
A king may warble in the spring | P |
And carry eggs home in his hat | X |
Provided that he is a king | P |
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I loved to stroll about the town | Y |
With chums at night and talk of things | G |
And though I chanced to wear the crown | Y |
My friends by intellect were kings | G |
When I was doubtful then I might | S |
Discuss a matter quietly | G |
But when I felt that I was right | S |
No power on earth could alter me | G |
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And now and then it was no sin | Z |
Nor folly to relax a bit | A2 |
I d take my friends into an inn | Z |
And call for wine and pay for it | A2 |
And then of many things we d clack | B2 |
With loosened tongues and visions clear | C2 |
I often heard behind my back | B2 |
The whispered Peace the king is here | D2 |
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The women harped about a queen | E2 |
I knew they longed to have a court | F2 |
And flaunt their feathers on the scene | E2 |
But hitherto I d held the fort | F2 |
My subjects wanted me no doubt | G2 |
To give the throne a son and heir | H2 |
There were some little kings about | G2 |
But that was neither here nor there | H2 |
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I d no occasion for a wife | I2 |
A queen as yet was not my plan | D |
I d seen a lot of married life | I2 |
My sire had been a married man | D |
A son and heir be hanged I said | J2 |
How dare you ask for such a thing | P |
You fight it out when I am dead | J2 |
And let the best man be the king | P |
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Your Majesty we love you well | K2 |
A candid friend would say to me | G |
But there be tales that people tell | K2 |
Unfitted to thy dignity | G |
My dignity be damned I d say | G |
Bring me no women s chattering | P |
I ll be a man while yet I may | G |
When trouble comes I ll be a king | P |
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I d kept my kingdom clean and strong | R |
While other kingdoms were like ours | G |
I had no need to brook a wrong | R |
I feared not all the rotten Powers | G |
I did not eat my heart out then | L2 |
Nor feebly fight in verse or prose | G |
I d take five hundred thousand men | L2 |
To argue matters with my foes | G |
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It thrilled me through the mighty tramp | M2 |
Of arm d men the thundering cheer | C2 |
The pregnant whisper through the camp | M2 |
At dead of night The King is here | D2 |
And though we paid for victory | G |
On some fields that were hard to hold | N2 |
The faith my soldiers had in me | G |
Oft strengthened mine a hundredfold | N2 |
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I d chat with soldiers by the fires | G |
On rocky heights and river banks | G |
I d seek the brains that war requires | G |
And take my captains from the ranks | G |
And so until the storm was by | O2 |
And came the peace just war can bring | P |
I bore me so that men might cry | O2 |
With all their hearts God Save the King | P |
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When I was king the world was wide | N2 |
And I was strong and I was free | G |
I knew no hatred knew no pride | N2 |
No envy and no treachery | G |
I feared no lies I feared no truth | P2 |
Nor any storm that time might bring | P |
I had my love I had my youth | P2 |
The world was mine when I was king | P |
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Peace came at last and strange is Fate | N2 |
The women begged just once alone | Q |
To see me robed in royal state | N2 |
And seated on my father s throne | Q |
I thought Shall I this boon deny | O2 |
And said and twas a paltry thing | P |
I ll show the fools just once that I | O2 |
Can look as well as be a king | P |
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They dusted out the castle old | N2 |
And from the closet and the chest | N2 |
They dug the jewels set in gold | N2 |
The crown and robes and all the rest | N2 |
They came with eyes like stars of night | N2 |
With diamonds set in raven hair | H2 |
They came with arms and bosoms white | N2 |
And Oh my God but one was fair | H2 |
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They dressed me as the kings had been | Z |
The ancient royal purple spread | N2 |
And one that was to be my queen | E2 |
She placed the circlet on my head | N2 |
They pressed their hearts and bowed to me | G |
They knelt with arms uplifted all | Q2 |
I felt the rush of vanity | G |
The pride that goes before the fall | Q2 |
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And then the banquet and the wine | R2 |
With Satan s music and the glance | G |
Of siren eyes Those captains mine | R2 |
Were reeling in the maddening dance | G |
A finger writing on the wall | Q2 |
While girls sang as the angels sing | P |
A drunken boaster in the hall | Q2 |
The fool that used to be a king | P |
I rose again no matter how | M |
A woman and a deeper fall | Q2 |
I move amongst my people now | M |
The most degraded of them all | Q2 |
But if in centuries to come | S2 |
I live once more and claim my own | Q |
I ll see my subjects blind and dumb | S2 |
Before they set me on a throne | Q |
Henry Lawson
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