The Ballad Of The Elder Son Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: ABABCDCD EFGFHIHI JKJKLDLD MNMNODPD QKQKRDRD STUTVWXW IYIYZA2A2A2 A2B2A2B2IKIK A2C2IC2IB2IB2 A2KA2KA2A2A2A2 CVCXD2ME2M IF2IF2DA2DA2 A2TA2TDA2DA2 A2TA2TA2MA2M IB2IB2A2IA2I E2IE2IG2CG2C DB2DB2CA2CA2 IH2IH2I2DI2D J2IJ2ILK2LK2 L2A2L2A2A2DA2D A2IM2IA2DA2D L2N2L2N2B2IB2I O2A2O2A2IUIU NA2NA2P2B2P2B2 A2H2A2H2IDIDA son of elder sons I am | A |
Whose boyhood days were cramped and scant | B |
Through ages of domestic sham | A |
And family lies and family cant | B |
Come elder brothers mine and bring | C |
Dull loads of care that you have won | D |
And gather round me while I sing | C |
The ballad of the elder son | D |
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Twas Christ who spake in parables | E |
To picture man was his intent | F |
A simple tale He simply tells | G |
And He Himself makes no comment | F |
A morbid sympathy is felt | H |
For prodigals the selfish ones | I |
The crooked world has ever dealt | H |
Unjustly by the elder sons | I |
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The elder son on barren soil | J |
Where life is crude and lands are new | K |
Must share the father s hardest toil | J |
And share the father s troubles too | K |
With no child thoughts to meet his own | L |
His childhood is a lonely one | D |
The youth his father might have known | L |
Is seldom for the eldest son | D |
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It seems so strange but fate is grim | M |
And Heaven s ways are hard to track | N |
Though ten young scamps come after him | M |
The rod falls heaviest on his back | N |
And well I ll say it might be caused | O |
By a half sense of injustice done | D |
That vague resentment parents feel | P |
So oft towards the eldest son | D |
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He too must bear the father s name | Q |
He loves his younger brother too | K |
And feels the younger brother s shame | Q |
As keenly as his parents do | K |
The mother s prayers the father s curse | R |
The sister s tears have all been done | D |
We seldom see in prose or verse | R |
The prayers of the elder son | D |
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But let me to the parable | S |
With eyes on facts but fancy free | T |
And don t belie me if I tell | U |
The story as it seems to me | T |
For mind I do not mean to sneer | V |
I was religious when a child | W |
I wouldn t be surprised to hear | X |
That Christ himself had sometimes smiled | W |
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A certain squatter had two sons | I |
Up Canaan way some years ago | Y |
The graft was hard on those old runs | I |
And it was hot and life was slow | Y |
The younger brother coolly claimed | Z |
The portion that he hadn t earned | A2 |
And sought the life for which untamed | A2 |
And high young spirits always yearned | A2 |
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A year or so he knocked about | A2 |
And spent his cheques on girls and wine | B2 |
And getting stony in the drought | A2 |
He took a job at herding swine | B2 |
And though he is a hog that swigs | I |
And fools with girls till all is blue | K |
Twas rather rough to shepherd pigs | I |
And have to eat their tucker too | K |
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When he came to himself he said | A2 |
I take my Bible from the shelf | C2 |
There s nothing like a feed of husks | I |
To bring a young man to himself | C2 |
And when you re done with wine and girls | I |
Right here a moral seems to shine | B2 |
And are hard up you ll find no pearls | I |
Are cast by friends before your swine | B2 |
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When he came to himself he said | A2 |
He reckoned pretty shrewdly too | K |
The rousers in my father s shed | A2 |
Have got more grub than they can chew | K |
I ve been a fool but such is fate | A2 |
I guess I ll talk the guv nor round | A2 |
I ve acted cronk I ll tell him straight | A2 |
He s had his time too I ll be bound | A2 |
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I ll tell him straight I ve had my fling | C |
I ll tell him I ve been on the beer | V |
But put me on at anything | C |
I ll graft with any bounder here | X |
He rolled his swag and struck for home | D2 |
He was by this time pretty slim | M |
And when the old man saw him come | E2 |
Well you know how he welcomed him | M |
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They ve brought the best robe in the house | I |
The ring and killed the fatted calf | F2 |
And now they hold a grand carouse | I |
And eat and drink and dance and laugh | F2 |
And from the field the elder son | D |
Whose character is not admired | A2 |
Comes plodding home when work is done | D |
And very hot and very tired | A2 |
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He asked the meaning of the sound | A2 |
Of such unwonted revelry | T |
They said his brother had been found | A2 |
He d found himself it seemed to me | T |
Twas natural in the elder son | D |
To take the thing a little hard | A2 |
And brood on what was past and done | D |
While standing outside in the yard | A2 |
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Now he was hungry and knocked out | A2 |
And would if they had let him be | T |
Have rested and cooled down no doubt | A2 |
And hugged his brother after tea | T |
And welcomed him and hugged his dad | A2 |
And filled the wine cup to the brim | M |
But just when he was feeling bad | A2 |
The old man came and tackled him | M |
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He well might say with bitter tears | I |
While music swelled and flowed the wine | B2 |
Lo I have served thee many years | I |
Nor caused thee one grey hair of thine | B2 |
Whate er thou bad st me do I did | A2 |
And for my brother made amends | I |
Thou never gavest me a kid | A2 |
That I might make merry with my friends | I |
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He was no honest clod and glum | E2 |
Who could not trespass sing nor dance | I |
He could be merry with a chum | E2 |
It seemed if he had half a chance | I |
Perhaps if further light we seek | G2 |
He knew and herein lay the sting | C |
His brother would clear out next week | G2 |
And promptly pop the robe and ring | C |
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The father said The wandering one | D |
The lost is found this son of mine | B2 |
But thou art always with me son | D |
Thou knowest all I have is thine | B2 |
It seemed the best robe and the ring | C |
The love and fatted calf were not | A2 |
But this was just a little thing | C |
The old man in his joy forgot | A2 |
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The father s blindness in the house | I |
The mother s fond and foolish way | H2 |
Have caused no end of ancient rows | I |
Right back to Cain and Abel s day | H2 |
The world will blame the eldest born | I2 |
But well when all is said and done | D |
No coat has ever yet been worn | I2 |
That had no colour more than one | D |
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Oh if I had the power to teach | J2 |
The strength for which my spirit craves | I |
The cant of parents I would preach | J2 |
Who slave and make their children slaves | I |
For greed of gain and that alone | L |
Their youth they steal their hearts they break | K2 |
And then the wretched misers moan | L |
We did it for our children s sake | K2 |
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And all I have the paltry bribe | L2 |
That he might slave contented yet | A2 |
While envied by his selfish tribe | L2 |
The birthright he might never get | A2 |
The worked out farm and endless graft | A2 |
The mortgaged home the barren run | D |
The heavy hopeless overdraft | A2 |
The portion of the elder son | D |
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He keeps his parents when they re old | A2 |
He keeps a sister in distress | I |
His wife must work and care for them | M2 |
And bear with all their pettishness | I |
The mother s moan is ever heard | A2 |
And whining for the worthless one | D |
She seldom has a kindly word | A2 |
To say about her eldest son | D |
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Tis he in spite of sneer and jibe | L2 |
Who stands the friend when others fail | N2 |
He bears the burdens of his tribe | L2 |
And keeps his brother out of jail | N2 |
He lends the quid and pays the fine | B2 |
And for the family pride he smarts | I |
For reasons I cannot divine | B2 |
They hate him in their heart of hearts | I |
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A satire on this world of sin | O2 |
Where parents seldom understand | A2 |
That night the angels gathered in | O2 |
The firstborn of that ancient land | A2 |
Perhaps they thought in those old camps | I |
While suffering for the blow that fell | U |
They might have better spared the scamps | I |
And Josephs that they loved so well | U |
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Sometimes the Eldest takes the track | N |
When things at home have got too bad | A2 |
He comes not crawling canting back | N |
To seek the blind side of his dad | A2 |
He always finds a knife and fork | P2 |
And meat between on which to dine | B2 |
And though he sometimes deals in pork | P2 |
You ll never catch him herding swine | B2 |
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The happy home the overdraft | A2 |
His birthright and his prospects gay | H2 |
And likewise his share of the graft | A2 |
He leaves the rest to grab And they | H2 |
Who d always do the thing by halves | I |
If anything for him was done | D |
Would kill a score of fatted calves | I |
To welcome home the eldest son | D |
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