The Ballad Of The Elder Son Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

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A son of elder sons I amA
Whose boyhood days were cramped and scantB
Through ages of domestic shamA
And family lies and family cantB
Come elder brothers mine and bringC
Dull loads of care that you have wonD
And gather round me while I singC
The ballad of the elder sonD
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Twas Christ who spake in parablesE
To picture man was his intentF
A simple tale He simply tellsG
And He Himself makes no commentF
A morbid sympathy is feltH
For prodigals the selfish onesI
The crooked world has ever dealtH
Unjustly by the elder sonsI
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The elder son on barren soilJ
Where life is crude and lands are newK
Must share the father s hardest toilJ
And share the father s troubles tooK
With no child thoughts to meet his ownL
His childhood is a lonely oneD
The youth his father might have knownL
Is seldom for the eldest sonD
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It seems so strange but fate is grimM
And Heaven s ways are hard to trackN
Though ten young scamps come after himM
The rod falls heaviest on his backN
And well I ll say it might be causedO
By a half sense of injustice doneD
That vague resentment parents feelP
So oft towards the eldest sonD
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He too must bear the father s nameQ
He loves his younger brother tooK
And feels the younger brother s shameQ
As keenly as his parents doK
The mother s prayers the father s curseR
The sister s tears have all been doneD
We seldom see in prose or verseR
The prayers of the elder sonD
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But let me to the parableS
With eyes on facts but fancy freeT
And don t belie me if I tellU
The story as it seems to meT
For mind I do not mean to sneerV
I was religious when a childW
I wouldn t be surprised to hearX
That Christ himself had sometimes smiledW
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A certain squatter had two sonsI
Up Canaan way some years agoY
The graft was hard on those old runsI
And it was hot and life was slowY
The younger brother coolly claimedZ
The portion that he hadn t earnedA2
And sought the life for which untamedA2
And high young spirits always yearnedA2
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A year or so he knocked aboutA2
And spent his cheques on girls and wineB2
And getting stony in the droughtA2
He took a job at herding swineB2
And though he is a hog that swigsI
And fools with girls till all is blueK
Twas rather rough to shepherd pigsI
And have to eat their tucker tooK
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When he came to himself he saidA2
I take my Bible from the shelfC2
There s nothing like a feed of husksI
To bring a young man to himselfC2
And when you re done with wine and girlsI
Right here a moral seems to shineB2
And are hard up you ll find no pearlsI
Are cast by friends before your swineB2
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When he came to himself he saidA2
He reckoned pretty shrewdly tooK
The rousers in my father s shedA2
Have got more grub than they can chewK
I ve been a fool but such is fateA2
I guess I ll talk the guv nor roundA2
I ve acted cronk I ll tell him straightA2
He s had his time too I ll be boundA2
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I ll tell him straight I ve had my flingC
I ll tell him I ve been on the beerV
But put me on at anythingC
I ll graft with any bounder hereX
He rolled his swag and struck for homeD2
He was by this time pretty slimM
And when the old man saw him comeE2
Well you know how he welcomed himM
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They ve brought the best robe in the houseI
The ring and killed the fatted calfF2
And now they hold a grand carouseI
And eat and drink and dance and laughF2
And from the field the elder sonD
Whose character is not admiredA2
Comes plodding home when work is doneD
And very hot and very tiredA2
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He asked the meaning of the soundA2
Of such unwonted revelryT
They said his brother had been foundA2
He d found himself it seemed to meT
Twas natural in the elder sonD
To take the thing a little hardA2
And brood on what was past and doneD
While standing outside in the yardA2
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Now he was hungry and knocked outA2
And would if they had let him beT
Have rested and cooled down no doubtA2
And hugged his brother after teaT
And welcomed him and hugged his dadA2
And filled the wine cup to the brimM
But just when he was feeling badA2
The old man came and tackled himM
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He well might say with bitter tearsI
While music swelled and flowed the wineB2
Lo I have served thee many yearsI
Nor caused thee one grey hair of thineB2
Whate er thou bad st me do I didA2
And for my brother made amendsI
Thou never gavest me a kidA2
That I might make merry with my friendsI
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He was no honest clod and glumE2
Who could not trespass sing nor danceI
He could be merry with a chumE2
It seemed if he had half a chanceI
Perhaps if further light we seekG2
He knew and herein lay the stingC
His brother would clear out next weekG2
And promptly pop the robe and ringC
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The father said The wandering oneD
The lost is found this son of mineB2
But thou art always with me sonD
Thou knowest all I have is thineB2
It seemed the best robe and the ringC
The love and fatted calf were notA2
But this was just a little thingC
The old man in his joy forgotA2
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The father s blindness in the houseI
The mother s fond and foolish wayH2
Have caused no end of ancient rowsI
Right back to Cain and Abel s dayH2
The world will blame the eldest bornI2
But well when all is said and doneD
No coat has ever yet been wornI2
That had no colour more than oneD
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Oh if I had the power to teachJ2
The strength for which my spirit cravesI
The cant of parents I would preachJ2
Who slave and make their children slavesI
For greed of gain and that aloneL
Their youth they steal their hearts they breakK2
And then the wretched misers moanL
We did it for our children s sakeK2
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And all I have the paltry bribeL2
That he might slave contented yetA2
While envied by his selfish tribeL2
The birthright he might never getA2
The worked out farm and endless graftA2
The mortgaged home the barren runD
The heavy hopeless overdraftA2
The portion of the elder sonD
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He keeps his parents when they re oldA2
He keeps a sister in distressI
His wife must work and care for themM2
And bear with all their pettishnessI
The mother s moan is ever heardA2
And whining for the worthless oneD
She seldom has a kindly wordA2
To say about her eldest sonD
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Tis he in spite of sneer and jibeL2
Who stands the friend when others failN2
He bears the burdens of his tribeL2
And keeps his brother out of jailN2
He lends the quid and pays the fineB2
And for the family pride he smartsI
For reasons I cannot divineB2
They hate him in their heart of heartsI
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A satire on this world of sinO2
Where parents seldom understandA2
That night the angels gathered inO2
The firstborn of that ancient landA2
Perhaps they thought in those old campsI
While suffering for the blow that fellU
They might have better spared the scampsI
And Josephs that they loved so wellU
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Sometimes the Eldest takes the trackN
When things at home have got too badA2
He comes not crawling canting backN
To seek the blind side of his dadA2
He always finds a knife and forkP2
And meat between on which to dineB2
And though he sometimes deals in porkP2
You ll never catch him herding swineB2
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The happy home the overdraftA2
His birthright and his prospects gayH2
And likewise his share of the graftA2
He leaves the rest to grab And theyH2
Who d always do the thing by halvesI
If anything for him was doneD
Would kill a score of fatted calvesI
To welcome home the eldest sonD

Henry Lawson



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