The Sinner Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: ABCDAEFG FDHIJFKK ILM NFMINOFPIF QRKGFFIS FTUUFVUMW| I would like today again as in the past | A |
| to get down to dad's feet | B |
| while the FM'radio loud sound | C |
| himself would woke the dead | D |
| as you share stories from your far past | A |
| dust and breath | E |
| while father's fully worked hands | F |
| quietly carving a biltong | G |
| - | |
| but heaven's tiki box's | F |
| line is dead | D |
| Dad with your wooden coat | H |
| under the lilac tree | I |
| on your bench | J |
| Dad I miss your Gray blue eyes | F |
| your soft heart | K |
| but the memory clings to my heart | K |
| - | |
| your sins thrown to vanity | I |
| served your liquor bottled jail | L |
| all i can say is i miss you | M |
| - | |
| I wish you were there | N |
| in times that my heart weeps | F |
| I drive past and look for you | M |
| but that porch is empty | I |
| I see you everywhere | N |
| in every rustle | O |
| I remember your tooth marks | F |
| in the butter | P |
| and your black sweet coffee | I |
| eclairs and suckers | F |
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| your feet were made of clay | Q |
| there was silver in your dark crown | R |
| but there were rays of sun in your heart | K |
| because you made me believe I'm strong | G |
| you made me believe I'm a fairy princess | F |
| you wiped my tears | F |
| you made me believe I'm worthy | I |
| you made me believe i was loved | S |
| - | |
| everyday I want to say Paps | F |
| thank you for all that dad gave | T |
| even though life was sometimes too much for dad | U |
| thank you for teaching me so much from Dad | U |
| because even in all of Dad's mistakes | F |
| father's tears were sometimes too much | V |
| I miss you my Dad | U |
| I would like to say I love you | M |
| I release you be your very best self | W |
Hanna Smit
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