Babel: The Gate Of The God Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: ABCDEFGHIJKLMNOPQRCS TUVG FJOGGCWXSGGD GGYGZA2GGB2G KC2GD2E2F2G2H2 CI2GJ2CKC IC GCB2IG IGA2A2 GB2II IGK2GIKIGIB2Lost towers impend copeless primeval props | A |
Of the new threatening sky and first rude digits | B |
Of awe remonstrance and uneasy power | C |
Thrust out by man when speech sank back in his throat | D |
Then had the last rocks ended bubbling up | E |
And rhythms of change within the heart begun | F |
By a blind need that would make Springs and Winters | G |
Pylons and monoliths went on by ages | H |
Mycenae and Great Zimbabwe came about | I |
Cowed hearts in This conceived a pyramid | J |
That leaned to hold itself upright a thing | K |
Foredoomed to limits death and an easy apex | L |
Then postulants for the stars' previous wisdom | M |
Standing on Carthage must get nearer still | N |
While in Chaldea an altitude of god | O |
Being mooted and a saurian unearthed | P |
Upon a mountain stirring a surmise | Q |
Of floods and alterations of the sea | R |
A round walled tower must rise upon Senaar | C |
Temple and escape to god the ascertained | S |
These are decayed like Time's teeth in his mouth | T |
Black cavities and gaps yet earth is darkened | U |
By their deep sunken and unfounded shadows | V |
And memories of man's earliest theme of towers | G |
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Space the old source of time should be undone | F |
Eternity defined by men who trusted | J |
Another tier would equal them with god | O |
A city of grimed brick kilns squat truncations | G |
Hunched like spread toads yet high beneath their circles | G |
Of low packed smoke assemblages of thunder | C |
That glowed upon their under sides by night | W |
And lit like storm small shadowless workmen's toil | X |
Meaningless stumps upturned bare roots remained | S |
In fields of mashy mud and trampled leaves | G |
While if a horse died hauling plasterers | G |
Knelt on a flank to clip its sweaty coat | D |
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A builder leans across the last wide courses | G |
His unadjustable unreaching eyes | G |
Fail under him before his glances sink | Y |
On the clouds' upper layers of sooty curls | G |
Where some long lightning goes like swallows downward | Z |
But at the wider gallery next below | A2 |
Recognise master masons with pricked parchments | G |
That builder then as one who condescends | G |
Unto the sea and all that is beneath him | B2 |
His hairy breast on the wet mortar calls | G |
'How many fathoms is it yet to heaven ' | - |
On the next eminence the orgulous king | K |
Nimroud stands up conceiving he shall live | C2 |
To conquer god now that he knows where god is | G |
His eager hands push up the tower in thought | D2 |
Again his shaggy inhuman height strides down | E2 |
Among the carpenters because he has seen | F2 |
One shape an eagle woman on a door post | G2 |
He drives his spear beam through him for wasted day | H2 |
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Little men hurrying running here and there | C |
Within the dark and stifling walls dissent | I2 |
From every sound and shoulder empty hods | G |
'The god's great altar should stand in the crypt | J2 |
Among our earth's foundations' 'The god's great altar | C |
Must be the last far coping of our work' | K |
It should inaugurate the broad main stair' | C |
'Or end it' 'It must stand toward the East ' | - |
But here a grave contemptuous youth cries out | I |
'Womanish babblers how can we build god's altar | C |
Ere we divine its foreordained true shape ' | - |
Then one 'It is a pedestal for deeds' | G |
''Tis more and should be hewn like the king's brow' | C |
'It has the nature of a woman's bosom' | B2 |
'The tortoise first created signifies it' | I |
'A blind and rudimentary navel shows | G |
The source of worship better than horned moons ' | - |
Then a lean giant 'Is not a calyx needful ' | - |
'Because round grapes on statues well expressed | I |
Become the nadir of incense nodal lamps | G |
Yet apes have hands that cut and carved red crystal' | A2 |
'Birds molten touchly talc veins bronze buds crumble | A2 |
Ablid ublai ghan isz rad eighar ghaurl ' | - |
Words said too often seemed such ancient sounds | G |
That men forgot them or were lost in them | B2 |
The guttural glottis chasms of language reached | I |
A rhythm a gasp were curves of immortal thought | I |
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Man with his bricks was building building yet | I |
Where dawn and midnight mingled and woke no birds | G |
In the last courses building past his knowledge | K2 |
A wall that swung for towers can have no tops | G |
No chord can mete the universal segment | I |
Earth has not basis Yet the yielding sky | K |
Invincible vacancy was there discovered | I |
Though piled up bricks should pulp the sappy balks | G |
Weight generate a secrecy of heat | I |
Cankerous charring crevices' fronds of flame | B2 |
Gordon Bottomley
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