Eland-s River Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: AABBACCA DDEFDGGD HHIICAAH JJKKJGGJ LLMMLNNL AAOOAGGAIT WAS on the fourth of August as five hundred of us lay | A |
In the camp at Eland s River came a shell from De La Rey | A |
We were dreaming of home faces | B |
Of the old familiar places | B |
And the gum trees and the sunny plains five thousand miles away | A |
But the challenge woke and found us | C |
With four thousand rifles round us | C |
And Death stood laughing at us at the breaking of the day | A |
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Hell belched upon our borders and the battle had begun | D |
Our Maxims jammed We faced them with one muzzle loading gun | D |
East south and west and nor ward | E |
Their shells came screaming forward | F |
As we threw the sconces round us in the first light of the sun | D |
The thin air shook with thunder | G |
As they raked us fore and under | G |
And the cordon closed around us as they held us eight to one | D |
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We got the Maxims going and the field gun into place | H |
She stilled the growling of a Krupp upon our southern face | H |
Round the crimson ring of battle | I |
Swiftly ran the deadly rattle | I |
As our rifles searched their fore lines with a desperate menace | C |
Who would wish himself away | A |
Fighting in our ranks that day | A |
For the glory of Australia and the honour of the race | H |
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But our horse lines soon were shambles and our cattle lying dead | J |
When twelve guns rake two acres there is little room to tread | J |
All day long we heard the drumming | K |
Of the Mauser bullets humming | K |
And at night their guns day sighted rained fierce havoc overhead | J |
Twelve long days and nights together | G |
Through the cold and bitter weather | G |
We lay grim behind the sconces and returned them lead for lead | J |
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They called us to surrender and they let their cannon lag | L |
They offered us our freedom for the striking of the flag | L |
Army stores were there in mounds | M |
Worth a hundred thousand pounds | M |
And we lay battered round them behind trench and sconce and crag | L |
But we sent the answer in | N |
They could take what they could win | N |
We hadn t come five thousand miles to fly the coward s rag | L |
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We saw the guns of Carrington come on and fall away | A |
We saw the ranks of Kitchener across the kopje grey | A |
For the sun was shining then | O |
Upon twenty thousand men | O |
And we laughed because we knew in spite of hell fire and delay | A |
On Australia s page for ever | G |
We had written Eland s River | G |
We had written it for ever and a day | A |
George Essex Evans
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