The Outlaw Murray Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

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The Text is derived with trivial alterations from Herd's MSS In the first edition of the Minstrelsy of the Scottish Border Scott says the principal copy he employed was one 'apparently of considerable antiquity' among the papers of Mrs Cockburn he also made use of Herd's MS and the Glenriddell MS In the second edition of the Minstrelsy he made further additions including one of three stanzas between and of the present version which makes reference to an earlier Sir Walter ScottA
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The Story of this Scots outlaw makes tame reading after those which precede it in this volume The ballad was inserted at the end of Child's collection only because he preferred 'to err by including rather than excluding ' He adds 'I am convinced that it did not begin its existence as a popular ballad and I am not convinced that as Scott asserts it has been for ages a popular song in Selkirkshire ' Nevertheless it undoubtedly gained a place in popular tradition and this while entitling it to a place here renders the elaborate historical investigation to which it has been submitted since Child's edition a waste of erudition and ingenuityB
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THE OUTLAW MURRAYB
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Ettrick Forest is a fair forestC
In it grows many a seemly treeB
The hart the hynd the doe the roeD
And of a' wild beastis great plentieC
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There's a castell biggit with lime and staneE
O gin it stands not pleasantlieF
In the forefront o' that castell fairG
Twa unicorns are bra' to seeB
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There's the picture of a knight and a ladye brightC
And the grene hollin abune their breeB
There an Outlaw keeps five hundred menE
He keeps a royal companieE
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His merry men are in ae liverie cladC
Of the Lincoln grene sae fair to seeB
He and his ladie in purple cladC
O gin they live not royallieF
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Word is gane to our noble kingH
In Edinburgh where that he layF
That there was an Outlaw in Ettrick ForestC
Counted him nought and all his courtrie gayF
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'I mak a vow ' then the gude king saidC
'Unto the man that dear bought meB
I'se either be king of Ettrick ForestC
Or king of Scotland that Outlaw's be '-
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Then spak the earl hight HamiltonE
And to the noble king said heB
'My sovereign prince some counsel takeI
First of your nobles syne of meB
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'I redd ye send yon bra' Outlaw tillF
And see gif your man come will heB
Desire him come and be your manE
And hold of you yon forest freeB
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'And gif he refuses to do thatC
We'll conquer both his lands and heB
Or else we'll throw his castell downE
And mak a widow o' his gay ladye '-
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The king called on a gentlemanE
James Boyd Earl of Arran his brother was heB
When James he came before the kingH
He fell before him on his kneeB
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'Welcome James Boyd ' said our noble kingH
'A message ye maun gang for meB
Ye maun hie to Ettrick ForestC
To yon Outlaw where dwelleth heB
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'Ask him of whom he holds his landsJ
Or man who may his master beB
Desire him come and be my manE
And hold of me yon forest freeB
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'To Edinburgh to come and gangK
His safe warrant I sall beB
And gif he refuses to do thatC
We'll conquer baith his lands and heB
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'Thou may'st vow I'll cast his castell downE
And mak a widow o' his gay ladyeL
I'll hang his merry men pair by pairG
In ony frith where I may them see '-
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James Boyd took his leave of the noble kingH
To Ettrick Forest fair cam heB
Down Birkendale Brae when that he camM
He saw the fair forest with his eeB
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Baith doe and roe and hart and hindC
And of a' wild beastis great plentieC
He heard the bows that bauldly ringH
And arrows whidderand near him byN
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Of that fair castell he got a sightC
The like he nere saw with his eeB
On the forefront o' that castellF
Twa unicorns were bra' to seeB
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The picture of a knight and a lady brightC
And the green hollin abune their breeB
Thereat he spy'd five hundred menE
Shooting with bows upon the leeB
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They a' were in ae livery cladC
O' the Lincoln green sae fair to seeB
The knight and his ladye in purple cladC
O gif they lived right royallieB
Therefore he kend he was master manE
And served him in his ain degreeB
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'God mot thee save brave Outlaw MurrayB
Thy ladye and a' thy chivalrie '-
'Marry thou's welcome gentlemanE
Some king's messenger thou seems to be '-
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'The King of Scotland sent me hereO
And gude Outlaw I'm sent to theeB
I wad wot of whom ye hold your landsJ
Or man wha may thy master be '-
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'Thir landis are mine ' the Outlaw saidC
'I own na king in ChristentieC
Frae Soudron I this forest wanE
Whan the king nor 's knights were not to see '-
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'He desires you'll come to EdinburghD
And hold of him this forest freeB
And gif you refuse to do thisP
He'll conquer baith thy landis and theeB
He has vow'd to cast thy castell downE
And mak a widow o' thy gay ladyeL
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'He'll hang thy merry men pair by pairG
In ony frith where he may them find '-
'Aye by my troth ' the Outlaw saidC
'Than wad I think me far behindC
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'Ere the king my fair countrie getC
This land that 's nativest to meB
Mony o' his nobles sall be cauldC
Their ladyes sall be right wearie '-
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Then spak his ladye fair of faceQ
She said 'Without consent of meB
That an Outlaw shuld come before the kingH
I am right rad of treasonrieG
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'Bid him be gude to his lordis at hameB
For Edinburgh my lord sail never see '-
James tuke his leave of the Outlaw keenE
To Edinburgh boun is heB
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And when he cam before the kingH
He fell before him on his kneeB
'Welcome James Boyd ' said the noble kingH
'What forest is Ettrick Forest free '-
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'Ettrick Forest is the fairest forestC
That ever man saw with his eeB
There's the doe the roe the hart the hyndeC
And of a' wild beastis great plentieC
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'There's a pretty castell of lime and staneB
O gif it stands not pleasauntlieB
There's on the foreside of that castellB
Twa unicorns sae bra' to seeB
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'There's the picture of a knight and a ladye brightC
And the green hollin abune their breeB
There the Outlaw keepis five hundred menB
O gif they live not royallieB
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'His merry men in ae livery cladC
O' the Lincoln green so fair to seeB
He and his ladye in purple cladC
O gif they live not royallieB
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'He says yon forest is his ainB
He wan it from the SoudronieB
Sae as he wan it sae will he keep itC
Contrair all kings in Christentie '-
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'Gar ray my horse ' said the noble kingH
'To Ettrick Forest hie will I me'B
Then he gard graith five thousand menB
And sent them on for the forest freeB
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Then word is gane the Outlaw tillB
In Ettrick Forest where dwelleth heB
That the king was coming to his cuntrieB
To conquer baith his lands and heB
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'I mak a vow ' the Outlaw saidC
'I mak a vow and that trulieB
Were there but three men to take my partC
Yon king's coming full dear suld be '-
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Then messengers he called forthR
And bade them haste them speedilieB
'Ane of you go to HallidayC
The laird of the Covehead is heB
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'He certain is my sister's sonB
Bid him come quick and succour meB
Tell Halliday with thee to comeB
And show him a' the veritie '-
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'What news what news ' said HallidayC
'Man frae thy master unto me '-
'Not as ye wad seeking your aidC
The king's his mortal enemie '-
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'Aye by my troth ' quoth HallidayC
'Even for that it repenteth meB
For gif he lose fair Ettrick ForestC
He'll tak fair Moffatdale frae meB
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'I'll meet him wi' five hundred menB
And surely mae if mae may be '-
The Outlaw call'd a messengerB
And bid him hie him speedilyB
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'To Andrew Murray of CockpoolB
That man's a dear cousin to meB
Desire him come and make me aidC
With all the power that he may beB
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'The king has vow'd to cast my castle downB
And mak a widow of my gay ladyeL
He'll hang my merry men pair by pairB
In ony place where he may them see '-
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'It stands me hard ' quoth Andrew MurrayB
'Judge if it stands not hard with meB
To enter against a king with crownB
And put my lands in jeopardieC
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'Yet gif I come not on the dayC
Surely at night he sall me see '-
To Sir James Murray laird of TraquairB
A message came right speedilieB
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'What news what news ' James Murray saidC
'Man frae thy master unto me '-
'What need I tell for wel ye kenB
The king's his mortal enemieB
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'He desires ye'll come and make him aidC
With all the powers that ye may be '-
'And by my troth ' James Murray saidC
'With that Outlaw will I live and dieC
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'The king has gifted my lands lang syneB
It can not be nae war with me '-
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The king was coming thro' Caddon FordC
And fifteen thousand men was heB
They saw the forest them beforeB
They thought it awsome for to seeB
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Then spak the earl hight HamiltonB
And to the noble king said heB
'My sovereign prince some counsel takeI
First at your nobles syne at meB
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'Desire him meet thee at Penman's CoreB
And bring four in his companieB
Five earls sall gang yoursell beforeB
Gude cause that you suld honour'd beB
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'And if he refuses to do thatC
Wi' fire and sword we'll follow theeB
There sall never a Murray after himB
Have land in Ettrick Forest free '-
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The king then call'd a gentlemanB
Royal banner bearer then was heB
James Hope Pringle of Torsonse by nameB
He came and knelit upon his kneeB
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'Welcome James Pringle of TorsonseB
Ye maun a message gae for meB
Ye maun gae to yon Outlaw MurrayB
Surely where bauldly bideth heB
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'Bid him meet me at Penman's CoreB
And bring four of his companieB
Five earls sall come wi' myselB
Gude reason I suld honour'd beB
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'And if he refuses to do thatC
Bid him look for nae good o' meB
There sall never a Murray after himB
Have land in Ettrick Forest free '-
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James came before the Outlaw keenB
And served him in his ain degreeB
'Welcome James Pringle of TorsonseB
What tidings frae the king to me '-
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'He bids you meet him at Penman's CoreB
And bring four of your companieB
Five earls will come with the kingH
Mae mair in number will he beB
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'And gif you refuse to do thatC
I freely here upgive wi' theeB
There will never a Murray after theeB
Have land in Ettrick Forest freeB
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'He'll cast your bonny castle downB
And make a widow of your gaye ladyeL
He'll hang your merry men pair by pairB
In ony place where he may them see '-
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'It stands me hard ' the Outlaw saidC
'Judge if it stands not hard with meB
I reck not of losing of mysellB
But all my offspring after meB
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'Auld Halliday young HallidayC
Ye sall be twa to gang wi' meB
Andrew Murray and Sir James MurrayB
We'll be nae mae in companie '-
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When that they came before the kingH
They fell befor him on their kneeB
'Grant mercy mercy royal kingH
E'en for His sake who died on tree '-
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'Siecan like mercie sall ye haveS
On gallows ye sall hangit be '-
'God forbid ' quo' the Outlaw thenB
'I hope your grace will better be '-
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'These lands of Ettrick Forest fairB
I wan them frae the enemieB
Like as I wan them sae will I keep themB
Contrair all kings in Christentie '-
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All the nobles said the king aboutC
Pitie it were to see him dieC
'Yet grant me mercy sovereign princeB
Extend your favour unto meB
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'I'll give you the keys of my castellB
With the blessing o' my fair ladyeL
Mak me the sheriff of the forestC
And all my offspring after me '-
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'Wilt thou give me the keys of thy castellB
With the blessing of thy fair ladyeL
I'll mak thee sheriff of the ForestC
Surely while upwards grows the treeB
If you be not traitour to the kingH
Forfaulted sall ye never be '-
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'But prince what sall come o' my menB
When I go back traitour they'll ca' meB
I had rather lose my life and landC
Ere my merry men rebuk d me '-
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'Will your merry men amend their livesB
And all their pardons I grant theeB
Now name thy landes where'er they beB
And here I render them to thee '-
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'Fair Philiphaugh prince is my ainB
I biggit it wi' lime and staneB
The Tinnies and the HangingshawT
My liege are native steads of mineB
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I have mony steads in the forest shawT
But them by name I dinna knaw '-
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The keys of the castle he gave the kingH
With the blessing of his fair ladyeL
He was made sheriff of Ettrick ForestC
Surely while upward grows the treeB
And if he was not traitour to the kingH
Forfaulted he suld never beB
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Wha ever heard in ony timesB
Siccan an outlaw in his degreeB
Sic favour get before a kingH
As did the Outlaw Murray of the forest freeB

Frank Sidgwick



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