The Most-sacred Mountain Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: ABCD EFDGHI JKL EGGMNGGEOPQDRD

Space and the twelve clean winds of heavenA
And this sharp exultation like a cry after the slow six thousandB
steps of climbingC
This is Tai Shan the beautiful the most holyD
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Below my feet the foot hills nestle brown with flecks of greenE
and lower down the flat brown plain the floor of earth stretches awayF
to blue infinityD
Beside me in this airy space the temple roofs cut their slow curvesG
against the skyH
And one black bird circles above the voidI
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Space and the twelve clean winds are hereJ
And with them broods eternity a swift white peace a presence manifestK
The rhythm ceases here Time has no place This is the end that has no endL
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Here when Confucius came a half a thousand years before the NazareneE
he stepped with me thus into timelessnessG
The stone beside us waxes old the carven stone that says On this spot onceG
Confucius stood and felt the smallness of the world belowM
The stone grows oldN
Eternity is not for stonesG
But I shall go down from this airy place this swift white peaceG
this stinging exultationE
And time will close about me and my soul stir to the rhythmO
of the daily roundP
Yet having known life will not press so close and always I shall feel timeQ
ravel thin about meD
For once I stoodR
In the white windy presence of eternityD

Eunice Tietjens



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