The Hunger Within Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: ABCDEFGHIJKLDMNCOHPQ RS

He makes his way to allA
Corners all hoursB
With the spotless desireC
to fill his crying tummyD
Sea of sweat from the confinesE
of his soul drips off his faceF
Careless He wipes it awayG
in exhaustionH
And then he overlooks hisI
feeble bones tissues andJ
musclesK
For fear of failing to lullL
his crying tummyD
AfterwardsM
His legs hungry for strengthN
takes him to his shelterC
When the sun casts it'sO
shadows on the sunH
he lay still on his bed like theP
mummies of Egypt wakingQ
up to the beginning of a newR
day's hard workS

Eshunson Writes
(C) All Rights Reserved. Poem Submitted on 04/11/2024

Poet's note: Here's a breakdown of the poem: Introduction The poem describes a person's daily struggle to survive, with a focus on their physical labor and exhaustion. The Struggle The person goes to all corners, at all hours, driven by the desire to feed their "crying tummy" (a metaphor for hunger and need). Their hard work is evident in the "sea of sweat" that runs down their face, which they wipe away carelessly, too exhausted to bother. Self-Disregard In their desperation to satisfy their hunger, they overlook their own physical limitations and weaknesses ("feeble bones, tissues, and muscles"). Fear of Failure The fear of failing to meet their basic needs drives them to continue working, despite their exhaustion. Rest and Respite Eventually, their legs, "hungry for strength," take them back to their shelter, where they can rest. The poem describes the person lying still on their bed, like an Egyptian mummy, at the end of the day. The Cycle Continues The poem concludes with the image of the person waking up to start another day of hard work, as the moon's dark shadows give way to the new day's light. This poem is a poignant portrayal of the daily struggles of a person living in poverty, highlighting the physical toll of hard labor, the fear of not meeting basic needs, and the relentless cycle of work and rest. The imagery and metaphors used create a vivid picture of the person's exhaustion and desperation.




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