Strucked Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: ABBBCDCECE FFFAAGAA HIHJJKJA

I'm strucked oh I'm struckedA
Loneliness strikes me like cycloneB
My situation has land by the milestoneB
The incidental hit disposes a scar now I bare my cross all aloneB
My life is a dark forsaken roomC
Long raided by thugs and goonsD
They faze like the incredible shape of a loomC
Raiders of discouragement joy stilling company and harmonyE
On many occasions I strive to zoomC
But under their superiorities I was already a colonyE
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I feel ultimately graveF
I reckon myself a coward no more braveF
This loneliness makes me determine my view as I'm coddled by caveF
The company I desire is nowhere aroundA
The life I fancy I wobble to access and it's expedient I perceive it profoundA
Every moves about my wretched soul is as snailG
Maybe I need my clone to help me expoundA
Expound vividly the stone in my mindA
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I'm drunk with cognac of painsH
my excess reasoning spill againI
I'm clueless about how to relate it strainsH
My life leans hopelessly against the wall buried in stupor of isolation and deprivationJ
This raided room is left with noneJ
Other than bottles of ale portraying a cure for contentment to be addicted to lonelinessK
I'm now lonely for funJ
I'm strucked oh I'm struckedA

Enoch Cole
(C) All Rights Reserved. Poem Submitted on 01/07/2023

Poet's note: I wrote this poem during my lonely moments It's about loneliness




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