Emptiness Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: ABCC DEFD| That one feeling that you feel sad but you can't cry | A |
| That one feeling that you are losing yourself | B |
| But you just can't talk about it | C |
| You feel like you're losing yourself but you can't help it | C |
| - | |
| Nothing bring joy pleasure anymore | D |
| You feel like you don't need anything | E |
| But you still feel empty inside | F |
| Am I just spoiled So full Or do I just need more | D |
Eli Ryan
(C) All Rights Reserved. Poem Submitted on 07/18/2022
Poet's note: The third stage of depression "Emptiness" My first poem here. It is one of my vent poems how I struggle with depression. I didn't feel anything just emptiness, selfishness, anger.
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