Unredeemed Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: ABABCDCD EFEFGHGF IJIJEKEKK LMNMN JOJO HEFE EKEK EPEP EQEQ RSRS EOEO TETE UKUK EOEO EKEK EEEE UKUK EVEV EWEW| I saw the Christ down from His cross | A |
| A tragic man lean limbed and tall | B |
| But weighed with suffering and loss | A |
| His back was to a broken wall | B |
| And out upon the tameless world | C |
| Was fixed His gaze His piercing eye | D |
| Beheld the towns to ruin hurled | C |
| And saw the storm of death pass by | D |
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| Two thousand years it was since first | E |
| He offered to the race of men | F |
| His sovran boon As one accurst | E |
| They nailed Him to the jibbet then | F |
| And while they mocked Him for their mirth | G |
| He smiled and from the hill of pain | H |
| To all the hating tribes of earth | G |
| Held forth His wondrous gift again | F |
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| To day the thorns were on His brow | I |
| His grief was deeper than before | J |
| From ravaged field and city now | I |
| Arose the screams and reek of war | J |
| The black smoke parted Through the rift | E |
| God's sun fell on the b oody lands | K |
| Christ wept for still His priceless gift | E |
| He held within His wounded hands | K |
| Xxxx | K |
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| The Living Picture | L |
| He rode along one splendid noon | M |
| When all the hills were lit with Spring | N |
| And through the bushland throbbed a croon | M |
| Of every living hopeful thing | N |
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| Between his teeth a rose he bore | J |
| As white as milk and passing there | O |
| He tossed it with a laugh I wore | J |
| It as it fell among my hair | O |
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| No day a drip with golden rain | H |
| No heat with drench of wattle scent | E |
| Can touch the heart of me again | F |
| But with that young sweet wonder blent | E |
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| We wed upon a gusty day | E |
| When baffled fury whipped the sea | K |
| And now I love the swift wet play | E |
| Of wind and rain besetting me | K |
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| I took white roses in my hand | E |
| A white rose on my forehead shone | P |
| For we had come to understand | E |
| White roses bloomed for us alone | P |
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| When scarce a year had gone he sped | E |
| To fight the wars With eyes grown grim | Q |
| He kissed my lips and whispering said | E |
| The world we must keep sweet for him | Q |
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| He wrote of war the soldier's life | R |
| 'Tis hard my dearest but be brave | S |
| I did not make my love my wife | R |
| To be the mother of a slave | S |
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| My babe was born a boy He had | E |
| His father's eyes his smile his hair | O |
| And oh my soul was brimming glad | E |
| It seemed his father's self was there | O |
| - | |
| But now came one who bade me still | T |
| In holy Heaven put my trust | E |
| They'd laid my love beneath the hill | T |
| And sealed his eyes with timeless dust | E |
| - | |
| Against my breast the babe I drew | U |
| With strength from him to stay my fears | K |
| I fought my fight the long days through | U |
| He laughed and dabbled in my tears | K |
| - | |
| From my poor heart at which it fed | E |
| With tiger teeth I thrust despair | O |
| And faced a world with shadow spread | E |
| And only echoes in the air | O |
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| The winter waned One eve I went | E |
| Led by a kindly hand to see | K |
| In moving scenes the churches rent | E |
| The tumbled hill the blasted lee | K |
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| Of soldiers resting by the road | E |
| Who smoked and drowsed a muddy rout | E |
| One sprang alert and forward strode | E |
| With eager eyes to seek us out | E |
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| His fingers held a rose He threw | U |
| The flower and waved his cap In me | K |
| A frenzy of assurance grew | U |
| For O dear God 'twas he 'twas he | K |
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| I called aloud Aloft my child | E |
| I held and nearer yet he came | V |
| And when he understood and smiled | E |
| My baby lisped his father's name | V |
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| They say I fell like something dead | E |
| But when I woke to morning's glow | W |
| My boy sat by me on the bed | E |
| And in his hand a rose of snow | W |
Edward George Dyson
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