Unredeemed Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: ABABCDCD EFEFGHGF IJIJEKEKK LMNMN JOJO HEFE EKEK EPEP EQEQ RSRS EOEO TETE UKUK EOEO EKEK EEEE UKUK EVEV EWEW

I saw the Christ down from His crossA
A tragic man lean limbed and tallB
But weighed with suffering and lossA
His back was to a broken wallB
And out upon the tameless worldC
Was fixed His gaze His piercing eyeD
Beheld the towns to ruin hurledC
And saw the storm of death pass byD
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Two thousand years it was since firstE
He offered to the race of menF
His sovran boon As one accurstE
They nailed Him to the jibbet thenF
And while they mocked Him for their mirthG
He smiled and from the hill of painH
To all the hating tribes of earthG
Held forth His wondrous gift againF
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To day the thorns were on His browI
His grief was deeper than beforeJ
From ravaged field and city nowI
Arose the screams and reek of warJ
The black smoke parted Through the riftE
God's sun fell on the b oody landsK
Christ wept for still His priceless giftE
He held within His wounded handsK
XxxxK
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The Living PictureL
He rode along one splendid noonM
When all the hills were lit with SpringN
And through the bushland throbbed a croonM
Of every living hopeful thingN
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Between his teeth a rose he boreJ
As white as milk and passing thereO
He tossed it with a laugh I woreJ
It as it fell among my hairO
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No day a drip with golden rainH
No heat with drench of wattle scentE
Can touch the heart of me againF
But with that young sweet wonder blentE
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We wed upon a gusty dayE
When baffled fury whipped the seaK
And now I love the swift wet playE
Of wind and rain besetting meK
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I took white roses in my handE
A white rose on my forehead shoneP
For we had come to understandE
White roses bloomed for us aloneP
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When scarce a year had gone he spedE
To fight the wars With eyes grown grimQ
He kissed my lips and whispering saidE
The world we must keep sweet for himQ
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He wrote of war the soldier's lifeR
'Tis hard my dearest but be braveS
I did not make my love my wifeR
To be the mother of a slaveS
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My babe was born a boy He hadE
His father's eyes his smile his hairO
And oh my soul was brimming gladE
It seemed his father's self was thereO
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But now came one who bade me stillT
In holy Heaven put my trustE
They'd laid my love beneath the hillT
And sealed his eyes with timeless dustE
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Against my breast the babe I drewU
With strength from him to stay my fearsK
I fought my fight the long days throughU
He laughed and dabbled in my tearsK
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From my poor heart at which it fedE
With tiger teeth I thrust despairO
And faced a world with shadow spreadE
And only echoes in the airO
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The winter waned One eve I wentE
Led by a kindly hand to seeK
In moving scenes the churches rentE
The tumbled hill the blasted leeK
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Of soldiers resting by the roadE
Who smoked and drowsed a muddy routE
One sprang alert and forward strodeE
With eager eyes to seek us outE
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His fingers held a rose He threwU
The flower and waved his cap In meK
A frenzy of assurance grewU
For O dear God 'twas he 'twas heK
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I called aloud Aloft my childE
I held and nearer yet he cameV
And when he understood and smiledE
My baby lisped his father's nameV
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They say I fell like something deadE
But when I woke to morning's glowW
My boy sat by me on the bedE
And in his hand a rose of snowW

Edward George Dyson



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