The Tin-pot Mill Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: ABABACAC DDCC AEAEAFAF GHIHJKJL MNJNMOMO PAPAQRQR PSPSPTPT DDCC

QUITE a proud and happy man is Finn the PackerA
Since he built his crazy mill upon the riseB
And he stands there in the gully chewing backerA
With a sleepy sort of comfort in his eyesB
Gazin up to where the antiquated jiggerA
Is a wheezing and a hopping on the hillC
For up here my lord the Gov nor isn t biggerA
Than the owner of the Federation MillC
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She goes biff puff bang bump cutter clatter smashD
And she rattles on for half a shift and lets up with a crashD
And then silence reigns a little while and all the land is stillC
While they re tinkering awkward patches on the tin pot millC
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It s a five head plant and mostly built of lumberA
Twas erected by a man that didn t knowE
And we ve never had a decent spell of slumberA
Since that battery of Finn s was got to goE
For she raises just the most infernal clatterA
And we guessed the Day of Judgment had come downF
When the tin pot mill began to bang and batterA
Like an earthquake in a boiler metal townF
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All the heads are different sizes and the horsesG
Are so crazy that the whole caboodle rocksH
And each time a stamper thunders down it forcesI
Little spirtings through the crannies in the boxH
Then the feed pipe s mostly plugged and aggravatingJ
And the pump it suffers badly from a coughK
Every hour or so they burst a blooming gratingJ
And the shoes are nearly always coming offL
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Mickey drives her with a portable a ruinM
That they used for donkeying cargo in the ArkN
When she s got a little way on and is doingJ
You should hear that spavined coffee grinder barkN
She is loose in all her joints and through corrosionM
Half her plates are not a sixteenth in the thickO
We re expecting a sensational explosionM
And a subsequent excursion after MickO
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From the feed which chokes to quite the smallest rippleP
From the bed logs to the guides she s mighty queerA
And she joggles like an agitated crippleP
With St Vitus dance intensified by beerA
She stops short and starts with most unearthly rumblesQ
And distracted by the silence and the dinR
Through the sleepless night the weary miner grumblesQ
And heaps curses on the family of FinnR
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But the owner s much too cute a man to wrangleP
He is crushing for the public understandS
And each ton of stuff that s hammered through the mangleP
Adds its tribute to the value of his landS
For she leaks the raw amalgam and he s ableP
To see daylight twixt the ripples an the platesT
And below the box and neath the shaking tableP
There are nest eggs cumulating while he waitsT
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She goes biff puff bang bump clitter clatter smashD
And she rattles on for half a shift and lets with a crashD
Then silence reigns a little while and the land is stillC
While they re tinkering awkward patches on the tin pot millC

Edward George Dyson



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