The Tin-pot Mill Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: ABABACAC DDCC AEAEAFAF GHIHJKJL MNJNMOMO PAPAQRQR PSPSPTPT DDCC| QUITE a proud and happy man is Finn the Packer | A |
| Since he built his crazy mill upon the rise | B |
| And he stands there in the gully chewing backer | A |
| With a sleepy sort of comfort in his eyes | B |
| Gazin up to where the antiquated jigger | A |
| Is a wheezing and a hopping on the hill | C |
| For up here my lord the Gov nor isn t bigger | A |
| Than the owner of the Federation Mill | C |
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| She goes biff puff bang bump cutter clatter smash | D |
| And she rattles on for half a shift and lets up with a crash | D |
| And then silence reigns a little while and all the land is still | C |
| While they re tinkering awkward patches on the tin pot mill | C |
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| It s a five head plant and mostly built of lumber | A |
| Twas erected by a man that didn t know | E |
| And we ve never had a decent spell of slumber | A |
| Since that battery of Finn s was got to go | E |
| For she raises just the most infernal clatter | A |
| And we guessed the Day of Judgment had come down | F |
| When the tin pot mill began to bang and batter | A |
| Like an earthquake in a boiler metal town | F |
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| All the heads are different sizes and the horses | G |
| Are so crazy that the whole caboodle rocks | H |
| And each time a stamper thunders down it forces | I |
| Little spirtings through the crannies in the box | H |
| Then the feed pipe s mostly plugged and aggravating | J |
| And the pump it suffers badly from a cough | K |
| Every hour or so they burst a blooming grating | J |
| And the shoes are nearly always coming off | L |
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| Mickey drives her with a portable a ruin | M |
| That they used for donkeying cargo in the Ark | N |
| When she s got a little way on and is doing | J |
| You should hear that spavined coffee grinder bark | N |
| She is loose in all her joints and through corrosion | M |
| Half her plates are not a sixteenth in the thick | O |
| We re expecting a sensational explosion | M |
| And a subsequent excursion after Mick | O |
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| From the feed which chokes to quite the smallest ripple | P |
| From the bed logs to the guides she s mighty queer | A |
| And she joggles like an agitated cripple | P |
| With St Vitus dance intensified by beer | A |
| She stops short and starts with most unearthly rumbles | Q |
| And distracted by the silence and the din | R |
| Through the sleepless night the weary miner grumbles | Q |
| And heaps curses on the family of Finn | R |
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| But the owner s much too cute a man to wrangle | P |
| He is crushing for the public understand | S |
| And each ton of stuff that s hammered through the mangle | P |
| Adds its tribute to the value of his land | S |
| For she leaks the raw amalgam and he s able | P |
| To see daylight twixt the ripples an the plates | T |
| And below the box and neath the shaking table | P |
| There are nest eggs cumulating while he waits | T |
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| She goes biff puff bang bump clitter clatter smash | D |
| And she rattles on for half a shift and lets with a crash | D |
| Then silence reigns a little while and the land is still | C |
| While they re tinkering awkward patches on the tin pot mill | C |
Edward George Dyson
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