Bricks Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: ABCDEBFDED GHEIJHKIEI LMNNOMPNON QRSETRUEVE HWEEXWYEEE SZA2HLZB2HEH EC2D2E2NC2NE2NE2E2 SF2SG2OF2SG2H2G2 EESI2J2EEI2C2I2 NKCK2LKL2K2EK2 SE2ESLE2M2SSS EM2LGEM2NGEG EB2E2ONB2GOE2O

Dear Ned I now take up my pen to writeA
you these few linesB
And hopin' how they find you fit Gorbli'C
it seems an ageD
Since Jumbo ducked the Port 'n' drilled 'n'E
polished to the ninesB
He walked his pork on Collins like a hero offF
the stageD
Then hiked a rifle 'cross the sea this bleedin'E
war to wageD
-
The things what's 'appened lately calls toG
Jumbo's mind that dayH
Our push took on the Peewee pack 'n'E
belted out their lardI
With twenty cops to top it off But now I'mJ
stowed awayH
A bullet in me gizzard where I took it goodK
and hardI
A dealin' stoush 'n' mullock to the PrussianE
flamin' GuardI
-
At Bullcoor mortal charnce had dumped aL
mutton truck of usM
From good ole Port ker flummox where weN
didn't orter beN
All in a 'elpless hole the Pug Bill CarkeekO
Son 'n' GusM
Don Steve 'n' Jack 'n' seven more 'n' asP
it 'appens meN
With nothin' in since breakfast 'n' a weekO
to go for teaN
-
Worked loose from Caddy's bunch we wentQ
it gay until we foundR
We'd took to 'arf the ragin' German HempireS
on our ownE
Then down we went so 'umble with our nosesT
in the groundR
Takin' cover in the rubble If a German headU
was shownE
It was fare the well to Herman with a bulletV
through the boneE
-
We slogged the cows remorseless 'n' theyH
laid for us a treatW
We held that stinkin' cellar though 'n' whenE
the day was doneE
Son pussied on his bingie where a Maxie trimX
'n' neatW
Had spit out loaded lightnin' and he sluggedY
a tubby HunE
Then choked a Fritzie with his dukes 'n'E
pinched the sooner's gunE
-
We rigged her on her knuckle bones Cri'S
how she lapped 'em upZ
We hosed 'em out with livin' lead That wasA2
the second dayH
Me left eye I'd 'ave give for jest a bubble in aL
cupZ
Three fingers I'd 'ave parted for a bone I'veB2
flung awayH
But the butcher wasn't callin' 'n' the fountainE
didn't playH
-
T'was rotten mozzle Neddo We had blownE
out ever clipC2
'N' 'blooed the hammunition for the little boxD2
of tricksE2
Each took a batten in his fist Sez BillyN
Let 'er ripC2
But Son he claws his stubble Sez heN
Hold a brace of ticksE2
Then Yow he pipes 'n' Strewth heN
sez it's bricks you blightersE2
bricksE2
-
There's more than 'arf a million spilt whereS
somethin' hit a pubF2
We creeps among 'n' sorts 'em stack aforeS
'n' stack behindG2
The Hun is comin' at us with his napper likeO
a tubF2
You couldn't 'ope to miss it pickled parS
alysed 'n' blindG2
Sez Sonny Lay 'em open Give 'emH2
blotches on the rindG2
-
Then bricks was flyin' in the wind MineE
dinted Otto's chinE
Ole Nosey got his brother which he neverS
more will roamI2
When Ulrich stopped a Port bookay he rolledJ2
his alley inE
Their fire was somethin' fierce Poor SonE
was blowin' blood 'n' foamI2
Fill up he coughs 'n' plug 'em S'elpC2
me Gord we're goin' 'omeI2
-
With bricks we drove right at 'em 'n' weN
wanged 'em best we couldK
'Twas either bed 'n' breakfast or a scribbleC
and a wreathK2
Haynes bust a Prussian's almond took theL
bay'net where he stoodK
Then heaved his last 'arf Brunswick splitL2
the demon's grinnin' teethK2
And Son went down in glory with a GermanE
underneathK2
-
We'd started out with gibbers in our clobberS
and our 'atsE2
They gave us floatin' lead enough to stop anE
army corS
We yelled like fiends 'n' countered with aL
lovely flight of batsE2
Then rushed in close formation heavin' cotM2
tages n' toreS
Through blinded bleedin' Bosches 'n' lorS
love yeh it was warS
-
We came peltin' headfirst 'elpless in a drainE
among a lotM2
Of dirty damned old Tommies Gord TheL
best that ever blewG
Eight left of us all punctured each manE
holdin' what he'd gotM2
Me wild a rat hole in me lung but in meN
mauley tooG
A bull nosed brick with whiskers where noE
whiskers ever grewG
-
There's nothin' doin' now I wear me blanE
kets like a toffB2
The way this fat nurse pets me strewth it'sE2
well to be so sickO
A dreamin' of our contract 'n' the way weN
pulled it offB2
I reckon Haig is phonin' Hughes HulloG
there Billy QuickO
A dozen of the pushes and a thousan' tonsE2
of brickO

Edward George Dyson



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