The Empty Space Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: ABCC DD EFGF HI JKJKL MMM NOPFE N| I cry ninety nine times and smile once | A |
| smile only when I hear your voice | B |
| lonely cold and frozen like the ice | C |
| longing for the cuddles you entice | C |
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| I think about you twenty hours in a day | D |
| holding on to the things you say | D |
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| Tears falling from my eyes | E |
| Rain falling from the sky | F |
| The house so silent | G |
| could only hear myself cry | F |
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| waking up to an empty space by me | H |
| makes me say things I really don't mean | I |
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| I am pained | J |
| because you weren't by my side | K |
| emotionally drained | J |
| because these things is what I get to hide | K |
| over this I only get to cry lain and act like I don't mind | L |
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| What do I do with the empty space | M |
| how do I get you to embrace | M |
| When will I get to see your face | M |
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| I am lonely no one to talk to | N |
| Missing my love | O |
| Someone so dear to my heart | P |
| I just can't help it but to cry | F |
| Pouring down tears from my eyes | E |
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| please come back I really miss you | N |
Edith Nornubari
(C) All Rights Reserved. Poem Submitted on 04/30/2026
Poet's note: When you find yourself in a distance relationship, that moment when you need your man and he is not by your side. It hurts.
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