Amend My Heart Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: A BCDE FCFE GHIE| Who talk say love no sweet | A |
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| Val is for lovers they say | B |
| Many people already lost faith in love | C |
| crying and begging everyday just to make things right | D |
| yet the problem isn't solved | E |
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| maybe I should give up | F |
| maybe I should hate love | C |
| dem say na person weh give up fuck up | F |
| but if I hate love will the problem be solved | E |
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| Love is sweet only with the right person | G |
| one thing is to love another to be loved | H |
| loving and be loved is a desirable blessing | I |
| so if you are loved by whom you love then the problem is solved | E |
Edith Nornubari
(C) All Rights Reserved. Poem Submitted on 05/02/2026
Poet's note: This is a reminder that true love exist jo matter how the society makes it look like.
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