Closings Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: A BCDEFGHIJ KLMNOPBQR QDSDTUVWX YZBSEEA2B2C2 DD2E2F2ZDDG2D H2I2J2DDK2L2M2O N2DO2O2J2P2Q2DS R2QDO2S2SST2S ZO2HZT2U2O2F2O2

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Always Be Closing Liam told usB
abc of real estate used carsC
and poetry Liam the dandyD
loved Brooks Brothers shirts double breastedE
suits bespoke shoes and linen jacketsF
On the day Liam and Tree marriedG
in our backyard Liam and I woreH
Chuck's burgundy boho prep high topsI
that Liam bought on Fifth AvenueJ
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When the rain started we moved indoorsK
and Liam read a Quartet aloudL
T S Eliot turned old and frailM
at sixty pale preparing for deathN
Then poets of new generationsO
died Frank O'Hara first then Jim WrightP
with throat cancer in a Bronx hospiceB
Sylvia Plath beside the ovenQ
Thom Gunn of an overdose DeniseR
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Levertov Bob Creeley Jane KenyonQ
In a New York bar Liam told meD
eccentric affectionate storiesS
about a road trip in Tree's countryD
of Montana and the joy they feltT
in the abundance of their marriageU
At Bennington Tree said Fourteen yearsV
after the wedding in your backyardW
I love Liam with my entire heartX
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Liam's face changed quickly as he spokeY
eyes and mouth erupting with gustoZ
as he improvised his outrageousB
cheerful inventive obscenitiesS
When I first met him I expoundedE
at a young poet's do his beardedE
face was handsome and expressionlessA2
He would not defer to a poetB2
fifty years old After a few monthsC2
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he was revising my lines for meD
making the metaphors I couldn'tD2
Even now working at poems IE2
imagine for a moment LiamF2
disassembling them A year agoZ
he watched the progress of age turn meD
skeletal pale flesh hanging looselyD
in folds from my arms and thin rib bonesG2
like grates above a sagging bellyD
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His body would never resembleH2
my body Four or five times a weekI2
we wrote letters back and forth talkingJ2
about class structure about how TreeD
took charge over the AcademyD
of American Poets aboutK2
poems and new attacks on free speechL2
When I won a notorious prizeM2
Liam sent me eighty one notionsO
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about projects I might undertakeN2
Number fifty six instructed meD
Urge poets to commit suicideO2
His whole life he spoke of suicideO2
lightly when he wasn't preservingJ2
the First Amendment from Jesse HelmsP2
or enduring two colon cancersQ2
or watching films or chatting with TreeD
or undergoing heart surgeriesS
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If he walked their dog Keeper one blockR2
he had to take nitroglycerinQ
When Jane was dying Liam and TreeD
drove up to say goodbye I wheelchairedO2
Jane to a pile of books by her chairS2
to find the color plate of Caillebotte'sS
shadowy kitchen garden at YerresS
for the jacket of Otherwise whenT2
Tree would design it I think of Jane'sS
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horror if she were alive to knowZ
that on August fifteenth Liam pulledO2
the shotgun's trigger The night beforeH
wearing a tux over a yellowZ
silk shirt he danced with Tree once againT2
before bed and the morning's murderU2
He left Tree alone and desolateO2
but without anger Tree knew LiamF2
did what he planned and needed to doO2

Donald Hall



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