The Struggle Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: ABCDEFDGHIJKLMNOIPQ RSTBGUVWXDYD ZDA2B2C2D2ATE2DD F2WAG2TH2I2H2J2I2K2L 2ADAVAVAKVDM2D DN2O2P2DDQ2DDH2TR2S2 M2M2YL2 DDDEDA EAT2DEU2DDV2H2DDW2Q2 QFQ2X2DY2P2Z2A3D DB3C3 DD3E3F3G3H3DTVKB2DO| I have been down in a dark valley | A |
| I have been groping through a deep gorge | B |
| Far above the lips of it were rimmed with moon | C |
| light | D |
| And here and there the light lay on the dripping | E |
| rocks | F |
| So that it seemed they dripped with moonlight | D |
| not with water | G |
| So deep it was that narrow gash among the hills | H |
| That those great pines which fringed its edge | I |
| Seemed to me no larger than upthrust fingers | J |
| Silhouetted against the sky | K |
| And at its top the vale was strait | L |
| And the rays were slant | M |
| And reached but part way down the sides | N |
| I could not see the moon itself | O |
| I walked through darkness and the valley's edge | I |
| Seemed almost level with the stars | P |
| The stars that were like fireflies in the little trees | Q |
| - | |
| It was the midnight of defeat | R |
| I felt that I had failed | S |
| I was mocked of the gods | T |
| There was no way out of that gorge | B |
| The paths led no whither | G |
| And I could not remember their beginnings | U |
| I was doomed to wander evermore | V |
| Thirsty with the sound of mocking waters in | W |
| mine ears | X |
| Groping with gleams of useless light | D |
| Splashed in ironic beauty on the rocks above | Y |
| And so I whined | D |
| - | |
| And then despair flashed into rage | Z |
| I leapt erect and cried | D |
| Could I but grasp my life as sculptors grasp the clay | A2 |
| And knead and thrust it into shape again | B2 |
| If all the scorn of Heaven were but thrown | C2 |
| Into the focus of some creature I could clutch | D2 |
| If something tangible were but vouchsafed me | A |
| By the cold far gods | T |
| If they but sent a Reason for the failure of my life | E2 |
| I'd answer it | D |
| If they but sent a Fiend I'd conquer it | D |
| - | |
| But I reach out and grasp the air | F2 |
| I rage and the brute rock echoes my words in | W |
| mockery | A |
| How can one fight the sliding moonlight on the cliffs | G2 |
| You gods coward gods | T |
| Come down I challenge you | H2 |
| You who set snares with roses and with passion | I2 |
| You who make flesh beautiful and damn men through | H2 |
| the flesh | J2 |
| You who plump the purple grape and then put poison | I2 |
| in the cup | K2 |
| You who put serpents in your Edens | L2 |
| You who gave me delight of my senses and broke me | A |
| for it | D |
| You who have mingled death with beauty | A |
| You who have put into my blood the impulses for | V |
| which you cursed me | A |
| You who permitted my brain the doubts wherefore | V |
| you damn me | A |
| Behold I doubt you gods no longer but defy | K |
| I perish here | V |
| Then I will be slain of a god | D |
| You who have wrapped me in the scorn of your silence | M2 |
| The divinity in this same dust you flout | D |
| - | |
| i Flames through the dust | D |
| And dares | N2 |
| And flings you back your scorn | O2 |
| Come face to face and slay me if you will | P2 |
| But not until you've felt the weight | D |
| Of all betricked humanity's contempt | D |
| In one bold blow | Q2 |
| Speak forth a Reason and I will answer it | D |
| Yes to your faces I will answer it | D |
| Come garmented in flesh and I will fight with you | H2 |
| Yes in your faces will I smite you gods | T |
| Coward gods and tricksters that set traps | R2 |
| In paradise | S2 |
| Far gods that hedge yourselves about with silence | M2 |
| And with distance | M2 |
| That mock men from the unscalable escarpments of | Y |
| your Heavens | L2 |
| - | |
| Thus I raved being mad | D |
| I had no sooner finished speaking than I felt | D |
| The darkness fluttered by approaching feet | D |
| And the silence was burned through by trembling | E |
| flames of sound | D |
| And I was 'ware that Something stood by me | A |
| - | |
| And with a shout I leapt and grasped that Being | E |
| And the Thing grasped me | A |
| We came to wrestling grips | T2 |
| And back and forth we swayed | D |
| Hand seeking throat and crook'd knee seeking | E |
| To encrook unwary leg | U2 |
| And spread toes grasping the uneven ground | D |
| The strained breast muscles cracked and creaked | D |
| The sweat ran in my eyes | V2 |
| The plagued breath sobbed and whistled through | H2 |
| my throat | D |
| I tasted blood and strangled but still struggled | D |
| on | W2 |
| The stars above me danced in swarms like yellow | Q2 |
| bees | Q |
| The shaken moonlight writhed upon the rocks | F |
| But at the last I felt his breathing weaker grow | Q2 |
| The tense limbs grow less tense | X2 |
| And with a bursting cry I bent his head right | D |
| back | Y2 |
| Back back until | P2 |
| I heard his neck bones snap | Z2 |
| His spine crunched in my grip | A3 |
| I flung him to the earth and knelt upon his breast | D |
| - | |
| And listened till the fluttering pulse was stilled | D |
| Man god or devil I had wrenched the life from | B3 |
| him | C3 |
| - | |
| And lo even as he died | D |
| The moonlight failed above the vale | D3 |
| And somehow sure I know now how | E3 |
| Between the rifted rocks the great Sun struck | F3 |
| A finger down the cliff and that red beam | G3 |
| Lay sharp across the face of him that I had slain | H3 |
| And in that light I read the answer of the silent | D |
| gods | T |
| Unto my cursed out prayer | V |
| For he that lay upon the ground was I | K |
| I understood the lesson then | B2 |
| It was myself that lay there dead | D |
| Yes I had slain my Self | O |
Don Marquis
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