Snow White's Acne Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: ABCDDEFGHIDJKLMNOPQR SORTUVWXDYYZQA2B2C2

At first she was sure it was just a bit of dried strawberry juiceA
or a fleck of her mother's red nail polish that had flaked offB
when she'd patted her daughter to sleep the night beforeC
But as she scrubbed Snow felt a bump something festeringD
under the surface like a tapeworm curled up and livingD
in her left cheekE
Doc the Dwarf was no dermatologistF
and besides Snow doesn't get to meet him in this versionG
because the mint leaves the tall doctor puts over her faceH
only make matters worse Snow and the Queen hopeI
against hope for chicken pox measles somethingD
that would be gone quickly and not plague Snow's wholeJ
adolescenceK
If only freckles were red she cried if onlyL
concealer really worked Soon came the pus the yellow dotsM
multiplying like pins in a pin cushion Soon cameN
the greasy hair The Queen gave her daughter a razorO
for her legs and a stick of underarm deodorantP
SnowQ
doodled through her teenage years 'Snow ' in MagicR
Markered hearts all over her notebooks She was an averageS
student a daydreamer who might have been a scholarO
if she'd only applied herself She liked sappy musicR
and romance novels She liked pies and cakeT
instead of fruitU
The Queen remained the fairest in the landV
It was hard on Snow having such a glamorous momW
She rebelled by wearing torn shawls and baggy gownsX
Her mother would sometimes say 'Snow darlingD
why don't you pull back your hair Show those pretty eyes 'Y
or 'Come on I'll take you shopping 'Y
Snow preferredZ
staying in her safe room looking out of her windowQ
at the deer leaping across the lawn Or she'd practiceA2
her dance moves with invisible princes And the QueenB2
busy being Queen didn't like to push itC2

Denise Duhamel



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