Macfadden And Macfee Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: ABCDBEFGH IJKJ LMLM NEOE EMPM JMQM IERE ESJS METE EMUM MJEJ JJMJ JMJM EJEJ VJWJ XMAMThis ballad is of great interest and as far as we know | A |
has not hitherto appeared in print It is certainly not in | B |
Child's Collection It was taken down from the singing of an | C |
aged man of years in Glen Kennaquhair Internal | D |
evidence would tend to show that the incidents recorded in | B |
the ballad occurred in the seventeenth century and that Sir | E |
Walter Scott had heard at least one verse of it The aged | F |
singer now alas no more sang it to the air of Barbara | G |
Allen | H |
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It was an' aboot the Lammas time | I |
In sixteen forty three sirs | J |
That there fell oot the awfu' fecht | K |
'Twixt Macfadden an' Macfee sirs | J |
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Macfadden wha was gaun to kirk | L |
Upon the morn's morn | M |
Had washed his kilt an' cleaned his dirk | L |
An' combed his Sabbath sporran | M |
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An' bein' for the time o' year | N |
Remarkably fine weather | E |
These articles o' dress were laid | O |
To air upon the heather | E |
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Waes me Macfee while dandrin' owre | E |
The bonnie braes o' Lorne | M |
Maun gang an' pit his muckle fit | P |
Upon Macfadden's sporran | M |
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A piece o' carelessness like this | J |
The brichtest heart would sadden | M |
An' when he saw the caitiff deed | Q |
It fair gaed owre Macfadden | M |
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For he was shavin' at the time | I |
An' when the sicht he saw sir | E |
Wi' rage he shook an' nearly took | R |
His neb aff wi' his raazor | E |
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A while he swore and staunched the gore | E |
An' ere Macfee got ae lick | S |
Macfadden cursed him heid an' heels | J |
In comprehensive Gaelic | S |
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Syne when his breath was a' but gane | M |
An' when he couldna say more | E |
He lat a muckle Heelant yell | T |
An' at him wi' his claymore | E |
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What sweeter sound could warrior hear | E |
Unless it was the daddin' | M |
That echoed oot when'er Macfee | U |
Got hame upon Macfadden | M |
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Nae sweeter soond I weel could ween | M |
Exceppin' it micht be sirs | J |
The soond that hurtled oot when'er | E |
Macfadden hit Macfee sirs | J |
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An awfu' fecht it was to see | J |
A fecht baith fell an' dour sirs | J |
For ere the tuilzie weel began | M |
The glen was fu' o' stour sirs | J |
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An awfu' fecht again I say't | J |
And on each auld clay biggin' | M |
The freends o' baith like hoodie craws | J |
Were roostin' on the riggin' | M |
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And aye they buckled till't wi' birr | E |
In combat sair an' grievous | J |
They glanced like lightnin' up Strathyre | E |
An' thundered doon Ben Nevis | J |
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Wha won the fecht or whilk ane lost | V |
Was hid frae mortal e'e sirs | J |
Nane saw the fearsome end o' baith | W |
Macfadden an' Macfee sirs | J |
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But still they say at break o' day | X |
Upon the braes o' Lorne | M |
Ye'll hear the ghaistly rustlin' o' | A |
Macfadden's Sabbath sporran | M |
David Rorie
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