Baby Tortoise Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: ABCDEF G H IJKLMNH OPNOBQR Q SSTUH VQWXYZPB QA2B2C2 D D2C2E2F2Q G2ND2 SH2F2 D2D2QD D2I2 I2J2A K2L2M2 I2QN2AO2P2Q2 EI2R2 D2I2I2 D2D2

You know what it is to be born aloneA
Baby tortoiseB
The first day to heave your feet little by little from the shellC
Not yet awakeD
And remain lapsed on earthE
Not quite aliveF
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A tiny fragile half animate beanG
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To open your tiny beak mouth that looks as if it would never openH
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Like some iron doorI
To lift the upper hawk beak from the lower baseJ
And reach your skinny little neckK
And take your first bite at some dim bit of herbageL
Alone small insectM
Tiny bright eyeN
Slow oneH
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To take your first solitary biteO
And move on your slow solitary huntP
Your bright dark little eyeN
Your eye of a dark disturbed nightO
Under its slow lid tiny baby tortoiseB
So indomitableQ
No one ever heard you complainR
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You draw your head forward slowly from your little wimpleQ
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And set forward slow dragging on your four pinned toes Rowing slowly forwardS
Whither away small birdS
Rather like a baby working its limbsT
Except that you make slow ageless progressU
And a baby makes noneH
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The touch of sun excites youV
And the long ages and the lingering chillQ
Make you pause to yawnW
Opening your impervious mouthX
Suddenly beak shaped and very wide like some suddenly gaping pincersY
Soft red tongue and hard thin gumsZ
Then close the wedge of your little mountain frontP
Your face baby tortoiseB
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Do you wonder at the world as slowly you turn your head in its wimpleQ
And look with laconic black eyesA2
Or is sleep coming over you againB2
The non lifeC2
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You are so hard to wakeD
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Are you able to wonderD2
Or is it just your indomitable will and pride of the first lifeC2
Looking roundE2
And slowly pitching itself against the inertiaF2
Which had seemed invincibleQ
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The vast inanimateG2
And the fine brilliance of your so tiny eyeN
ChallengerD2
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Nay tiny shell birdS
What a huge vast inanimate it is that you must row againstH2
What an incalculable inertiaF2
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ChallengerD2
Little Ulysses fore runnerD2
No bigger than my thumb nailQ
Buon viaggioD
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All animate creation on your shoulderD2
Set forth little Titan under your battle shieldI2
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The ponderous preponderateI2
Inanimate universeJ2
And you are slowly moving pioneer you aloneA
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How vivid your travelling seems now in the troubled sunshineK2
Stoic Ulyssean atomL2
Suddenly hasty reckless on high toesM2
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Voiceless little birdI2
Resting your head half out of your wimpleQ
In the slow dignity of your eternal pauseN2
Alone with no sense of being aloneA
And hence six times more solitaryO2
Fulfilled of the slow passion of pitching through immemorial agesP2
Your little round house in the midst of chaosQ2
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Over the garden earthE
Small birdI2
Over the edge of all thingsR2
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TravellerD2
With your tail tucked a little on one sideI2
Like a gentleman in a long skirted coatI2
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All life carried on your shoulderD2
Invincible fore runnerD2

David Herbert Lawrence



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