Eastern Star Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: ABCC DEFAG HDIJ K LMKN K OPQR K SOTN U DDVW

If there is no freedom within you you won t inspire anyoneA
If a star is born only in the sky and not in you you won t see the lightB
If heaven is not in you you will never get thereC
If there is hell in you you will never escape from thereC
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If you are not forgiving you will never breathe freelyD
If you don t give you will never flyE
If you lose hope you will never wake upF
If you don t steer your passionA
You will never quench your yearningG
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You told me one day I am your songH
Your breath is the song and the song is like meD
Children are playing soon calmness will comeI
I feel your breath in front of the gateJ
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So far so far so near and so farK
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You re the vineyard s gate and this gate is the heartL
The heart is the choice the choice is the wayM
You are what I think and always you areK
You are what I saw and always you wereN
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So far so far so near and so farK
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So let me sing in your transparent breathO
Be like the wine in your divine veinsP
I am wishing to let you hear the song as I amQ
and let me please you you know I need this tooR
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So far so far so near and so farK
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All the words variations come down to one truthS
And all the ideas come down to one breathO
And all the world s secrets in your heart are revealedT
Till the star of the East is the sign of the futureN
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So near and not far Almighty and calmU
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Eastern star is trembling all over meD
and also all over you we hear and we seeD
the spirit of silence within our breatheV
Oh yes one which we take and yes one which we leaveW

David Dephy
(C) All Rights Reserved. Poem Submitted on 04/22/2021

Poet's note: May 8, 2018 Southampton, New York All rights reserved © New York USA Poetry Orchestra © New York USA Eastern Star / Poetry / Adelaide Books New York / 2020 David Dephy’s exuberant poems shout from the streets of Georgia to New York City. His work is honest and returns again and again to the idea of eternal hope, and freedom, despite the circumstances. When he writes, “The trust is the heart of prescience,” the reader is reminded that there is something eternal for Dephy and at the heart of everything, there must be acceptance. - Gloria Monaghan is an award-winning poet, author of the poetry books Flawed (Finishing Line Press, 2011) The Garden (Flutter Press, 2015) False Spring (Adelaide Books, 2019) Hydrangea (Kelsay Press, 2020) When I first saw David Dephy read “Eastern Star,” I thought of William Blake. It was an instinctive response, rather than critical or intellectual, born of the poem’s aphoristic intelligence, its refusal to reduce the world to the commonplace. That same engagement shimmers through this book, when the poet’s reflection in the mirror asks, “Would life be better if we could forget the past … forget the present?” And again, “Build or destroy — there is one choice, / there is no judge …” I think Mr. Blake would be pleased. - Aaron Fischer is an award-winning poet. An author of the chapbook, Black Stars of Blood: The Weegee Poems (Main Street Rag, 2018) The love affair David Dephy is having with the world runs like “a stream of childhood’s miracles” through his poems: “a godhead of rushing river that sweeps us along.” Dephy doesn’t reserve this cosmic Whitmanesque for himself alone: “You are better, I am convinced.” We are better, certainly, for the wild, sweet imagination coursing through Dephy’s Eastern Star. - Stephen Frech is an award-winning poet author of four volumes of poetry: Toward Evening and the Day Far Spent (Kent State University Press, 1995) If Not For These Wrinkles of Darkness (White Pine Press, 2001) The Dark Villages of Childhood (Midwest Writing Center, 2009) A Palace of Strangers Is No City (ervena Barva Press, 2011) David Dephy -- A Georgian/American award-winning poet and novelist. The winner of the Spillwords Poetry Award, the finalist of the Adelaide Literary Awards for the category of Best Poem. He is named as A Literature Luminary by Bowery Poetry and The Incomparable Poet by Statorec. His works have been published and anthologized in USA, UK and all over the world by the many literary magazines, journals and publishing houses. He lives in New York. Barnes & Noble




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