Snake Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: ABC DED FAGHIDD AJ KKLMNJ DOH PA QAHN QQOO HQ OMON RSTHCOQOH UEUEO EVE QOWOS OOS HX JOY HZOH

A snake came to my water troughA
On a hot hot day and I in pyjamas for the heatB
To drink thereC
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In the deep strange scented shade of the great dark carob treeD
I came down the steps with my pitcherE
And must wait must stand and wait for there he was at the trough before meD
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He reached down from a fissure in the earth wall in the gloomF
And trailed his yellow brown slackness soft bellied down over the edge of the stone troughA
And rested his throat upon the stone bottomG
And where the water had dripped from the tap in a small clearnessH
He sipped with his straight mouthI
Softly drank through his straight gums into his slack long bodyD
SilentlyD
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Someone was before me at my water troughA
And I like a second comer waitingJ
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He lifted his head from his drinking as cattle doK
And looked at me vaguely as drinking cattle doK
And flickered his two forked tongue from his lips and mused a momentL
And stooped and drank a little moreM
Being earth brown earth golden from the burning bowels of the earthN
On the day of Sicilian July with Etna smokingJ
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The voice of my education said to meD
He must be killedO
For in Sicily the black black snakes are innocent the gold are venomousH
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And voices in me said If you were a manP
You would take a stick and break him now and finish him offA
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But must I confess how I liked himQ
How glad I was he had come like a guest in quiet to drink at my water troughA
And depart peaceful pacified and thanklessH
Into the burning bowels of this earthN
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Was it cowardice that I dared not kill himQ
Was it perversity that I longed to talk to himQ
Was it humility to feel honouredO
I felt so honouredO
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And yet those voicesH
If you were not afraid you would kill himQ
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And truly I was afraid I was most afraidO
But even so honoured still moreM
That he should seek my hospitalityO
From out the dark door of the secret earthN
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He drank enoughR
And lifted his head dreamily as one who has drunkenS
And flickered his tongue like a forked night on the air so blackT
Seeming to lick his lipsH
And looked around like a god unseeing into the airC
And slowly turned his headO
And slowly very slowly as if thrice adreamQ
Proceeded to draw his slow length curving roundO
And climb again the broken bank of my wall faceH
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And as he put his head into that dreadful holeU
And as he slowly drew up snake easing his shoulders and entered furtherE
A sort of horror a sort of protest against his withdrawing into that horrid black holeU
Deliberately going into the blackness and slowly drawing himself afterE
Overcame me now his back was turnedO
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I looked round I put down my pitcherE
I picked up a clumsy logV
And threw it at the water trough with a clatterE
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I think it did not hit himQ
But suddenly that part of him that was left behind convulsed in undignified hasteO
Writhed like lightning and was goneW
Into the black hole the earth lipped fissure in the wall frontO
At which in the intense still noon I stared with fascinationS
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And immediately I regretted itO
I thought how paltry how vulgar what a mean actO
I despised myself and the voices of my accursed human educationS
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And I thought of the albatrossH
And I wished he would come back my snakeX
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For he seemed to me again like a kingJ
Like a king in exile uncrowned in the underworldO
Now due to be crowned againY
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And so I missed my chance with one of the lordsH
Of lifeZ
And I have something to expiateO
A pettinessH

D. H. Lawrence (david Herbert Richards)



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