Save Me From These Lies Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: AABCA DDDD EFEG| My life is full of sadness and fear that i always feel | A |
| Having the freedom that I thought was a blessing which isn't real | A |
| But unknowingly a curse that can kill | B |
| Letting us risk between mountains of choices to unveil | C |
| When all of that is suffering and pain ready to reveal | A |
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| I exist but as a soulless and lifeless being | D |
| A being not merely living | D |
| Continously having glimpse of the past creating nightmares which they enjoy watching | D |
| Watching me torture myself while nonstop crying and suffering | D |
| - | |
| I'm alive but almost dying inside | E |
| Dying from my vast illusion of an imprisoned mind | F |
| Endless nightmares which I cannot escape and hide | E |
| Can someone save me because I'm afraid to die | G |
Chloe Altovar
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