Yes Yes Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: ABCDDEFGH IJGK LIM N

when God created love he didn't help mostA
when God created dogs He didn't help dogsB
when God created plants that was averageC
when God created hate we had a standard utilityD
when God created me He created meD
when God created the monkey He was asleepE
when He created the giraffe He was drunkF
when He created narcotics He was highG
and when He created suicide He was lowH
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when He created you lying in bedI
He knew what He was doingJ
He was drunk and He was highG
and He created the mountians and the sea and fire at the same timeK
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He made some mistakesL
but when He created you lying in bedI
He came all over His Blessed UniverseM
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Charles Bukowski



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