The Shoelace Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: AAABCDAEFAGHIAJKLMNL OPLLQGAALLRLLASFTLUL VWXLYLZLA2LLLLLB2X XXKLC2LLK LOGPD2XE2XF2F2F2G2GX LLVQAL B2BO

a woman aA
tire that s flat aA
disease aA
desire fears in front of youB
fears that hold so stillC
you can study themD
like pieces on aA
chessboardE
it s not the large things thatF
send a man to theA
madhouse death he s ready for orG
murder incest robbery fire floodH
no it s the continuing series of small tragediesI
that send a man to theA
madhouseJ
not the death of his loveK
but a shoelace that snapsL
with no time leftM
The dread of lifeN
is that swarm of trivialitiesL
that can kill quicker than cancerO
and which are always thereP
license plates or taxesL
or expired driver s licenseL
or hiring or firingQ
doing it or having it done to you orG
roaches or flies or aA
broken hook on aA
screen or out of gasL
or too much gasL
the sink s stopped up the landlord s drunkR
the president doesn t care and the governor sL
crazyL
light switch broken mattress like aA
porcupineS
for a tune up carburetor and fuel pump atF
sears roebuckT
and the phone bill s up and the market sL
downU
and the toilet chain isL
brokenV
and the light has burned outW
the hall light the front light the back lightX
the inner light it sL
darker than hellY
and twice asL
expensiveZ
then there s always crabs and ingrown toenailsL
and people who insist they reA2
your friendsL
there s always that and worseL
leaky faucet christ and christmasL
blue salami day rainsL
cent avocadosL
and purpleB2
liverwurstX
-
or making itX
as a waitress at norm s on the split shiftX
or as an emptier ofK
bedpansL
or as a carwash or a busboyC2
or a stealer of old lady s pursesL
leaving them screaming on the sidewalksL
with broken arms at the age ofK
-
suddenlyL
red lights in your rear view mirrorO
and blood in yourG
underwearP
toothache and for a bridgeD2
for a goldX
toothE2
and china and russia and america andX
long hair and short hair and noF2
hair and beards and noF2
faces and plenty of zigzag but noF2
pot except maybe one to piss inG2
and the other one around yourG
gutX
-
with each broken shoelaceL
out of one hundred broken shoelacesL
one man one woman oneV
thingQ
enters aA
madhouseL
-
so be carefulB2
when youB
bend overO

Charles Bukowski



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