The Lucky Ones Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: ABCD EFG HI JKL MN BOG BP QR G ISTB UVHOW XBYZ

stuck in the rain on the freeway p mA
these are the lucky ones these are theB
dutifully employed most with their radios on as loudC
as possible as they try not to think or rememberD
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this is our new civilization as menE
once lived in trees and caves now they liveF
in their automobiles and on freeways asG
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the local news is heard again and again whileH
we shift from first gear to second and back to firstI
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there's a poor fellow stalled in the fast lane ahead hoodJ
up he's standing against the freeway fenceK
a newspaper over his head in the rainL
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the other cars force their way around his car pull out intoM
the next lane in front of cars determined to shut them offN
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in the lane to my right a driver is being followed by aB
police car with blinking red and blue lights he surelyO
can't be speeding asG
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suddenly the rain comes down in a giant wash and all theB
cars stop andP
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even with the windows up I can smell somebody's clutchQ
burningR
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I just hope it's not mine asG
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the wall of water diminishes and we go back into firstI
gear we are all stillS
a long way from home as I memorizeT
the silhouette of the car in front of me and the shape of theB
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driver's head orU
whatV
I can see of it above the headrest whileH
his bumper sticker asks meO
HAVE YOU HUGGED YOUR KID TODAYW
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suddenly I have an urge to screamX
as another wall of water comes down and theB
man on the radio announces that there will be a percentY
chance of showers tomorrow nightZ

Charles Bukowski



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