I'm In Love Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: ABCBDEFGBHIJKKLLMNJN LKOPQBBBACRSGHTUTVHW

she's young she saidA
but look at meB
I have pretty anklesC
and look at my wrists I have prettyB
wristsD
o my godE
I thought it was all workingF
and now it's her againG
every time she phones you go crazyB
you told me it was overH
you told me it was finishedI
listen I've lived long enough to become aJ
good womanK
why do you need a bad womanK
you need to be tortured don't youL
you think life is rotten if somebody treats youL
rotten it all fitsM
doesn't itN
tell me is that it do you want to be treated like aJ
piece of shitN
and my son my son was going to meet youL
I told my sonK
and I dropped all my loversO
I stood up in a cafe and screamedP
I'M IN nbsp LOVEQ
and now you've made a fool of meB
I'm sorry I said I'm really sorryB
hold me she said will you please hold meB
I've never been in one of these things before I saidA
these trianglesC
she got up and lit a cigarette she was trembling allR
over she paced up and down wild and crazy she hadS
a small body her arms were thin very thin and whenG
she screamed and started beating me I held herH
wrists and then I got it through the eyes hatredT
centuries deep and true I was wrong and graceless andU
sick all the things I had learned had been wastedT
there was no creature living as foul as IV
and all my poems wereH
falseW

Charles Bukowski



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