Cut While Shaving Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: ABCBDEFFEGDHIFJK LM GNF OPQR ST U

It's never quite right he said the way people lookA
the way the music sounds the way the words areB
writtenC
It's never quite right he said all the things we areB
taught all the loves we chase all the deaths weD
die all the lives we liveE
they are never quite rightF
they are hardly close to rightF
these lives we liveE
one after the otherG
piled there as historyD
the waste of the speciesH
the crushing of the light and the wayI
it's not quite rightF
it's hardly right at allJ
he saidK
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don't I know it IL
answeredM
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I walked away from the mirrorG
it was morning it was afternoon it wasN
nightF
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nothing changedO
it was locked in placeP
something flashed something broke somethingQ
remainedR
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I walked down the stairway andS
into itT
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Submitted by TomU

Charles Bukowski



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