La Serpent Qui Danse (the Dancing Serpent) Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: ABAC ADAE FGFG FHFH IGIG IAIA JIJF AIAI KHKH A LGFM HIKI IAFN AAAA IGIO IIAA ICII PIIQ GRIA H I RIRI CGCG GGGG GHGH RARA AGAG IIII AQAQ JAJA F A ASAS HGHG GAGA IIII RARA AAAA CGCG TQTQ GAGA R A HIUF HAII RRIV AHAG RIRR WAIA ICRH RHIQ GHIA HQue j'aime voir ch re indolente | A |
De ton corps si beau | B |
Comme une toffe vacillante | A |
Miroiter la peau | C |
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Sur ta chevelure profonde | A |
Aux cres parfums | D |
Mer odorante et vagabonde | A |
Aux flots bleus et bruns | E |
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Comme un navire qui s' veille | F |
Au vent du matin | G |
Mon me r veuse appareille | F |
Pour un ciel lointain | G |
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Tes yeux o rien ne se r v le | F |
De doux ni d'amer | H |
Sont deux bijoux froids o se m le | F |
L'or avec le fer | H |
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te voir marcher en cadence | I |
Belle d'abandon | G |
On dirait un serpent qui danse | I |
Au bout d'un b ton | G |
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Sous le fardeau de ta paresse | I |
Ta t te d'enfant | A |
Se balance avec la mollesse | I |
D'un jeune l phant | A |
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Et ton corps se penche et s'allonge | J |
Comme un fin vaisseau | I |
Qui roule bord sur bord et plonge | J |
Ses vergues dans l'eau | F |
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Comme un flot grossi par la fonte | A |
Des glaciers grondants | I |
Quand l'eau de ta bouche remonte | A |
Au bord de tes dents | I |
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Je crois boire un vin de Boh me | K |
Amer et vainqueur | H |
Un ciel liquide qui pars me | K |
D' toiles mon coeur | H |
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The Dancing Serpent | A |
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Indolent darling how I love | L |
To see the skin | G |
Of your body so beautiful | F |
Shimmer like silk | M |
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Upon your heavy head of hair | H |
With its acrid scents | I |
Adventurous odorant sea | K |
With blue and brown waves | I |
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Like a vessel that awakens | I |
To the morning wind | A |
My dreamy soul sets sail | F |
For a distant sky | N |
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Your eyes where nothing is revealed | A |
Of bitter or sweet | A |
Are two cold jewels where are mingled | A |
Iron and gold | A |
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To see you walking in cadence | I |
With fine abandon | G |
One would say a snake which dances | I |
On the end of a staff | O |
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Under the weight of indolence | I |
Your child like head sways | I |
Gently to and fro like the head | A |
Of a young elephant | A |
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And your body stretches and leans | I |
Like a slender ship | C |
That rolls from side to side and dips | I |
Its yards in the sea | I |
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Like a stream swollen by the thaw | P |
Of rumbling glaciers | I |
When the water of your mouth rises | I |
To the edge of your teeth | Q |
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It seems I drink Bohemian wine | G |
Bitter and conquering | R |
A liquid sky that scatters | I |
Stars in my heart | A |
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Translated by William Aggeler | H |
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The Snake that Dances | I |
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I love to watch while you are lazing | R |
Your skin It iridesces | I |
Like silk or satin smoothly glazing | R |
The light that it caresses | I |
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Under your tresses dark and deep | C |
Where acrid perfumes drown | G |
A fragrant sea whose breakers sweep | C |
In mazes blue or brown | G |
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My soul a ship to the attraction | G |
Of breezes that bedizen | G |
Its swelling canvas clears for action | G |
And seeks a far horizon | G |
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Your eyes where nothing can be seen | G |
Either of sweet or bitter | H |
But gold and iron mix their sheen | G |
Seem frosty gems that glitter | H |
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To see you rhythmically advancing | R |
Seems to my fancy fond | A |
As if it were a serpent dancing | R |
Waved by the charmer's wand | A |
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Under the languorous moods that weigh it | A |
Your childish head bows down | G |
Like a young elephant's you sway it | A |
With motions soft as down | G |
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Your body leans upon the hips | I |
Like a fine ship that Iaves | I |
Its hull from side to side and dips | I |
Its yards into the waves | I |
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When as by glaciers ground the spate | A |
Swells hissing from beneath | Q |
The water of your mouth elate | A |
Rises between your teeth | Q |
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It seems some old Bohemian vintage | J |
Triumphant fierce and tart | A |
A liquid heaven that showers a mintage | J |
Of stars across my heart | A |
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Translated by Roy Campbell | F |
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Dancing Serpent | A |
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Indolent love with what delight | A |
I watch the tawny flesh | S |
Of your sweet body shimmer bright | A |
As a bright silken mesh | S |
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On your thick tresses love you wear | H |
Sharp perfumes for a crown | G |
A venturesome sweet sea your hair | H |
With billows blue and brown | G |
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Your eyes never betray by sign | G |
What grief or joy they hold | A |
They are cold jewels that combine | G |
Strong iron and rare gold | A |
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Even as a vessel that awakes | I |
When morning breezes rise | I |
So my dream laden spirit takes | I |
Off for strange distant skies | I |
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Your sinuous cadenced walk enhancing | R |
Your slim proud gait a frond | A |
Swaying you are or a snake dancing | R |
Atop a fakir's wand | A |
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Under a laziness like lead | A |
Your childlike head aslant | A |
Sways soft and gentle as the head | A |
Of a young elephant | A |
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Your body like a slender ship | C |
In tense or bowing motion | G |
Rolls slow from side to side to dip | C |
Its yards deep in the ocean | G |
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Ice thawed by currents from the south | T |
Swell the swift streams beneath | Q |
So when the water of your mouth | T |
Rises against your teeth | Q |
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I seem to drink Bohemian wine | G |
Victorious and tart | A |
A liquid sky that strews benign | G |
Stars in my peaceful heart | A |
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Translated by Jacques LeClercq | R |
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The Dancing Serpent | A |
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How I love to watch dear indolent creature | H |
The skin of your so | I |
Beautiful body glisten like some | U |
Quivering material | F |
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On your deep coiffure | H |
Bitter scented | A |
Scented restless sea | I |
With the blue and brown waves | I |
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Like a ship waking | R |
To the wind of morning | R |
My dreamy soul prepares | I |
For skies far away | V |
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Your eyes where nothing is revealed | A |
Of sweet or sour | H |
Are two cold gems whose gold | A |
Is mixed with iron | G |
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Seeing your harmonious walk | R |
Abandoned beauty | I |
One would say a snake was dancing | R |
At the end of a stick | R |
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Under the weight of your sloth | W |
Your infant head | A |
Is balanced with the indolence | I |
Of a young elephant | A |
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And your body bends and stretches | I |
Like a delicate ship | C |
Pitching from side to side and sinking | R |
Its spars in the water | H |
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Like a wave swelled by the melting | R |
Of a groaning glacier | H |
When your saliva rises | I |
To the edges of your teeth | Q |
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I feel I drink some Bohemian wine | G |
Bitter victor | H |
A liquid sky that scatters | I |
Stars in my heart | A |
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Translated by Geoffrey Wagner | H |
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