La Serpent Qui Danse (the Dancing Serpent) Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: ABAC ADAE FGFG FHFH IGIG IAIA JIJF AIAI KHKH A LGFM HIKI IAFN AAAA IGIO IIAA ICII PIIQ GRIA H I RIRI CGCG GGGG GHGH RARA AGAG IIII AQAQ JAJA F A ASAS HGHG GAGA IIII RARA AAAA CGCG TQTQ GAGA R A HIUF HAII RRIV AHAG RIRR WAIA ICRH RHIQ GHIA H

Que j'aime voir ch re indolenteA
De ton corps si beauB
Comme une toffe vacillanteA
Miroiter la peauC
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Sur ta chevelure profondeA
Aux cres parfumsD
Mer odorante et vagabondeA
Aux flots bleus et brunsE
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Comme un navire qui s' veilleF
Au vent du matinG
Mon me r veuse appareilleF
Pour un ciel lointainG
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Tes yeux o rien ne se r v leF
De doux ni d'amerH
Sont deux bijoux froids o se m leF
L'or avec le ferH
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te voir marcher en cadenceI
Belle d'abandonG
On dirait un serpent qui danseI
Au bout d'un b tonG
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Sous le fardeau de ta paresseI
Ta t te d'enfantA
Se balance avec la mollesseI
D'un jeune l phantA
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Et ton corps se penche et s'allongeJ
Comme un fin vaisseauI
Qui roule bord sur bord et plongeJ
Ses vergues dans l'eauF
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Comme un flot grossi par la fonteA
Des glaciers grondantsI
Quand l'eau de ta bouche remonteA
Au bord de tes dentsI
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Je crois boire un vin de Boh meK
Amer et vainqueurH
Un ciel liquide qui pars meK
D' toiles mon coeurH
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The Dancing SerpentA
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Indolent darling how I loveL
To see the skinG
Of your body so beautifulF
Shimmer like silkM
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Upon your heavy head of hairH
With its acrid scentsI
Adventurous odorant seaK
With blue and brown wavesI
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Like a vessel that awakensI
To the morning windA
My dreamy soul sets sailF
For a distant skyN
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Your eyes where nothing is revealedA
Of bitter or sweetA
Are two cold jewels where are mingledA
Iron and goldA
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To see you walking in cadenceI
With fine abandonG
One would say a snake which dancesI
On the end of a staffO
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Under the weight of indolenceI
Your child like head swaysI
Gently to and fro like the headA
Of a young elephantA
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And your body stretches and leansI
Like a slender shipC
That rolls from side to side and dipsI
Its yards in the seaI
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Like a stream swollen by the thawP
Of rumbling glaciersI
When the water of your mouth risesI
To the edge of your teethQ
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It seems I drink Bohemian wineG
Bitter and conqueringR
A liquid sky that scattersI
Stars in my heartA
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Translated by William AggelerH
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The Snake that DancesI
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I love to watch while you are lazingR
Your skin It iridescesI
Like silk or satin smoothly glazingR
The light that it caressesI
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Under your tresses dark and deepC
Where acrid perfumes drownG
A fragrant sea whose breakers sweepC
In mazes blue or brownG
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My soul a ship to the attractionG
Of breezes that bedizenG
Its swelling canvas clears for actionG
And seeks a far horizonG
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Your eyes where nothing can be seenG
Either of sweet or bitterH
But gold and iron mix their sheenG
Seem frosty gems that glitterH
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To see you rhythmically advancingR
Seems to my fancy fondA
As if it were a serpent dancingR
Waved by the charmer's wandA
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Under the languorous moods that weigh itA
Your childish head bows downG
Like a young elephant's you sway itA
With motions soft as downG
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Your body leans upon the hipsI
Like a fine ship that IavesI
Its hull from side to side and dipsI
Its yards into the wavesI
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When as by glaciers ground the spateA
Swells hissing from beneathQ
The water of your mouth elateA
Rises between your teethQ
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It seems some old Bohemian vintageJ
Triumphant fierce and tartA
A liquid heaven that showers a mintageJ
Of stars across my heartA
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Translated by Roy CampbellF
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Dancing SerpentA
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Indolent love with what delightA
I watch the tawny fleshS
Of your sweet body shimmer brightA
As a bright silken meshS
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On your thick tresses love you wearH
Sharp perfumes for a crownG
A venturesome sweet sea your hairH
With billows blue and brownG
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Your eyes never betray by signG
What grief or joy they holdA
They are cold jewels that combineG
Strong iron and rare goldA
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Even as a vessel that awakesI
When morning breezes riseI
So my dream laden spirit takesI
Off for strange distant skiesI
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Your sinuous cadenced walk enhancingR
Your slim proud gait a frondA
Swaying you are or a snake dancingR
Atop a fakir's wandA
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Under a laziness like leadA
Your childlike head aslantA
Sways soft and gentle as the headA
Of a young elephantA
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Your body like a slender shipC
In tense or bowing motionG
Rolls slow from side to side to dipC
Its yards deep in the oceanG
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Ice thawed by currents from the southT
Swell the swift streams beneathQ
So when the water of your mouthT
Rises against your teethQ
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I seem to drink Bohemian wineG
Victorious and tartA
A liquid sky that strews benignG
Stars in my peaceful heartA
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Translated by Jacques LeClercqR
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The Dancing SerpentA
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How I love to watch dear indolent creatureH
The skin of your soI
Beautiful body glisten like someU
Quivering materialF
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On your deep coiffureH
Bitter scentedA
Scented restless seaI
With the blue and brown wavesI
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Like a ship wakingR
To the wind of morningR
My dreamy soul preparesI
For skies far awayV
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Your eyes where nothing is revealedA
Of sweet or sourH
Are two cold gems whose goldA
Is mixed with ironG
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Seeing your harmonious walkR
Abandoned beautyI
One would say a snake was dancingR
At the end of a stickR
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Under the weight of your slothW
Your infant headA
Is balanced with the indolenceI
Of a young elephantA
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And your body bends and stretchesI
Like a delicate shipC
Pitching from side to side and sinkingR
Its spars in the waterH
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Like a wave swelled by the meltingR
Of a groaning glacierH
When your saliva risesI
To the edges of your teethQ
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I feel I drink some Bohemian wineG
Bitter victorH
A liquid sky that scattersI
Stars in my heartA
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Translated by Geoffrey WagnerH

Charles Baudelaire



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