A Une Madone (to A Madonna) Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

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Ex voto dans le go t espagnolA
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Je veux b tir pour toi Madone ma ma tresseB
Un autel souterrain au fond de ma d tresseB
Et creuser dans le coin le plus noir de mon coeurC
Loin du d sir mondain et du regard moqueurC
Une niche d'azur et d'or tout maill eD
O tu te dresseras Statue merveill eD
Avec mes Vers polis treillis d'un pur m talA
Savamment constell de rimes de cristalA
Je ferai pour ta t te une norme CouronneE
Et dans ma Jalousie mortelle MadoneE
Je saurai te tailler un Manteau de fa onE
Barbare roide et lourd et doubl de soup onE
Qui comme une gu rite enfermera tes charmesB
Non de Perles brod mais de toutes mes LarmesB
Ta Robe ce sera mon D sir fr missantF
Onduleux mon D sir qui monte et qui descendF
Aux pointes se balance aux vallons se reposeB
Et rev t d'un baiser tout ton corps blanc et roseB
Je te ferai de mon Respect de beaux SouliersB
De satin par tes pieds divins humili sB
Qui les emprisonnant dans une molle treinteF
Comme un moule fid le en garderont l'empreinteF
Si je ne puis malgr tout mon art diligentF
Pour Marchepied tailler une Lune d'argentF
Je mettrai le Serpent qui me mord les entraillesB
Sous tes talons afin que tu foules et raillesB
Reine victorieuse et f conde en rachatsB
Ce monstre tout gonfl de haine et de crachatsB
Tu verras mes Pensers rang s comme les CiergesB
Devant l'autel fleuri de la Reine des ViergesB
Etoilant de reflets le plafond peint en bleuA
Te regarder toujours avec des yeux de feuG
Et comme tout en moi te ch rit et t'admireC
Tout se fera Benjoin Encens Oliban MyrrheH
Et sans cesse vers toi sommet blanc et neigeuxB
En Vapeurs montera mon Esprit orageuxB
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Enfin pour compl ter ton r le de MarieD
Et pour m ler l'amour avec la barbarieD
Volupt noire des sept P ch s capitauxB
Bourreau plein de remords je ferai sept CouteauxB
Bien affil s et comme un jongleur insensibleA
Prenant le plus profond de ton amour pour cibleA
Je les planterai tous dans ton Coeur pantelantF
Dans ton Coeur sanglotant dans ton Coeur ruisselantF
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To a MadonnaE
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Votive Offering in the Spanish StyleA
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I want to build for you Madonna my mistressB
An underground altar in the depths of my griefG
And carve out in the darkest corner of my heartF
Far from worldly desires and mocking looksB
A niche all enameled with azure and with goldF
Where you shall stand amazed StatueF
With my polished Verses as a trellis of pure metalA
Studded cunningly with rhymes of crystalA
I shall make for your head an immense CrownE
And from my Jealousy O mortal MadonnaE
I shall know how to cut a cloak in a fashionE
Barbaric heavy and stiff lined with suspicionE
Which like a sentry box will enclose your charmsB
Embroidered not with Pearls but with all of my TearsB
Your Gown will be my Desire quiveringI
Undulant my Desire which rises and which fallsB
Balances on the crests reposes in the troughsB
And clothes with a kiss your white and rose bodyF
Of my Self respect I shall make you SlippersB
Of satin which humbled by your divine feetF
Will imprison them in a gentle embraceB
And assume their form like a faithful moldF
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If I can't in spite of all my painstaking artF
Carve a Moon of silver for your PedestalA
I shall put the Serpent which is eating my heartF
Under your heels so that you may trample and mockJ
Triumphant queen fecund in redemptionsB
That monster all swollen with hatred and spittleA
You will see my Thoughts like Candles in rowsB
Before the flower decked altar of the Queen of VirginsB
Starring with their reflections the azure ceilingI
And watching you always with eyes of fireD
And since my whole being admires and loves youF
All will become Storax Benzoin Frankincense MyrrhD
And ceaselessly toward you white snowy pinnacleA
My turbulent spirit will rise like a vaporD
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Finally to complete your role of MaryF
And to mix love with inhumanityF
Infamous pleasure of the seven deadly sinsB
I torturer full of remorse shall make sevenE
Well sharpened Daggers and like a callous jugglerD
Taking your deepest love for a targetF
I shall plant them all in your panting HeartF
In your sobbing Heart in your bleeding HeartF
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Translated by William AggelerD
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To a MadonnaE
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Ex Voto in Spanish StyleA
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I'd build Madonna love for my beliefG
An altar in the dim crypt of my griefG
And in the darkest comer of my heartF
From mortal lust and mockery far apartF
Scoop you a niche with gold and azure glazeB
Where you would stand in wonderment and gazeB
With my pure verses trellised and all roundF
In constellated rhymes of crystal boundF
And with a huge tiara richly crownedF
Out of the Jealousy which rules my passionE
Mortal Madonna I a cloak would fashionE
Barbarous stiff and heavy with my doubtF
Whereon as in a fourm you would fill outF
And mould your lair Of tears not pearls would beF
The sparkle of its rich embroideryF
Your robe would be my lust with waving flowA
Poising on tips in valleys lying lowA
And clothing in one kiss coral and snowA
In my Respect for satin you'll be shodF
Which your white feet would humble to the clodF
While prisoning their flesh with tender holdF
It kept their shape imprinted like a mouldF
If for a footstool to support your shoonA
For all my art I could not get the moonA
I'd throw the serpent that devours my vitalsB
Under your trampling heels for his requitalsB
Victorious queen to spurn bruise and belittleA
That monstrous worm blown up with hate and spittleA
Round you my thoughts like candles should be seenA
Around the flowered shrine of the virgins' QueenA
Reflected on a roof that's painted blueF
And aiming all their golden eyes at youF
Since nought is in me that you do not stirD
All will be incense benjamin and myrrhD
And up to you white peak in clouds will soarD
My stormy soul in rapture to adoreD
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In fine your role of Mary to perfectF
And mingle barbarism with respectF
Of seven deadly sins O black delightF
Remorseful torturer to show my sleightF
I'll forge and sharpen seven deadly swordsB
And like a callous juggler on the boardsB
Taking it for my target I would dartF
Them deep into your streaming sobbing heartF
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Translated by Roy CampbellA
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une MadoneA
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I'll build for thee Madonna mistress mineA
deep in my crypt of woe a secret shrineA
carve in the blackest corner of my heartF
from worldly lust and mocking eyes apartF
a niche with gold and blue enamel blentF
to hold thy statue filled with wondermentF
my polished verse of virgin metal hardF
with crystal rhymes artistically starredF
shall raise for thee a towering diademK
and from my jealousy I'll cut and hemK
a mangle mortal Lady mine designedF
as 'twere a sentry box stiff heavy linedF
with barbs of keen suspicion and with fearsB
embroidered not with pearls but all my tearsB
to make thy robe I'll give thee my desireD
that rises falls and quivers like a fireD
clings to each summit rests in each abyssB
and clothes thy rosy body with a kissB
of my respect I'll make thee buskins fineA
of satin humbled by thy feet divineA
to prison them in soft embraces warmL
and like a faithful mould to preserve their formL
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then if my art is powerless to cutF
thy pedestal a silver moon I'll putF
beneath thy heel the serpent in my heartF
for thee to bruise and mock because thou artF
the queen of my redemption conquering allA
even that monster spewing hate and gallA
thine altar like the Virgin's shall be twinedF
with flowers and like tapers all alignedF
my thoughts shall light the niche from those blue skiesB
watching thee always with their fiery eyesB
and since thou holdest all the love withinA
my heart as incense myrrh and benjaminA
in clouds forevermore to thee its goalA
o snowy peak shall rise my stormy soulA
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and last to makeM

Charles Baudelaire



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