Our Lovers, Brothers And Fathers Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: AB CD EF EG HIJK

The men that withhold great strength to pick us up each time we fall is using the very same strength to push us to the groundA
We have given them our hearts to mend and cautiously handle yet they break the small pieces that have leftB
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We were drawn to the fists that we learnt and hoped will protect us from all rivals it's Sad how we wish to excavate them from our skinC
In the jolly moments of embracing the kisses they showered us with we had to learn to be numb to the venomous words they utteredD
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It's Sad how we have to go from sharing our darkest secrets with them to hiding the bruises they gift to usE
We still hold on tight to the love we preach and the responsibility to keep our feelings to ourselvesF
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From wondering what we have done to deserve the care they show us to throwing wonders on what we have done to earn the pain they have taught usE
I hope they find it in their hidden charismatic hearts to forgive us as we have already suffered enoughG
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If this is a war we sincerely accept defeatH
The men we fell in love with do strongly wish we were strangers to hateI
If it is a punishment we admit we owe you a hill of apologiesJ
We are truly sorryK

Bonolo Duma
(C) All Rights Reserved. Poem Submitted on 08/07/2020

Poet's note: Gender-based Violence has become an issue in South Africa. It is gradually spreading. Women are being killed by the men they are close to .I Thought writing this poem would knoch some sense in our men.




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