Mortal Shower Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: ABBC DEFG HHBI JIB KLMN OPQR STUVWXY ZIIYA2B2C2 VD2E2F2G2H2 I2J2 K2IC2JL2M2N2O2 P2Q2R2SUOI met my butt in a Pittsburgh | A |
hotel room My face | B |
still looks like my face | B |
but not my butt my hair | C |
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no longer resembles an ad | D |
for Jell O pudding people thought | E |
it was chocolate pudding for years | F |
so thick | G |
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and rich There was fog | H |
in the bathroom and then not fog | H |
I faced my face | B |
and then not my face the mirror | I |
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staring at my ass | J |
winked at the mirror | I |
staring at my face | B |
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and the future was defined | K |
as an effort | L |
to use the word sag in my resume | M |
Have sagged will | N |
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sag am looking for a position | O |
in which to maximize my sagging | P |
potential I once cared | Q |
what went on back there about | R |
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the extent of grip and rise just | S |
as some birds crave | T |
the reddest plumage and I propositioned | U |
mirrors watched women s eyes | V |
follow turned in shop windows | W |
to see if my pants | X |
fit their purpose Then love | Y |
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and car payments love and the sofa | Z |
needs to be moved love and her grandmother | I |
dies my grandmother | I |
dies love | Y |
and she comes home and I m thrilled | A2 |
by her coat and voice | B2 |
and the brown habit of her eyes She | C2 |
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likes my ass and lies | V |
about its travels how it s lost | D2 |
focus and there are wattles | E2 |
to come please God | F2 |
if dentures | G2 |
only partials may Depends | H2 |
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be cheap in bulk and the earth | I2 |
generous with its telepathy I m | J2 |
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in Pittsburgh tonight | K2 |
and with her | I |
mirrors don t scare me | C2 |
room service is a gas | J |
because she s alive I m a giant | L2 |
a tight assed | M2 |
titan because she s alive | N2 |
and says | O2 |
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come home the Honda needs | P2 |
new brakes a robin flew | Q2 |
into the window today | R2 |
but shook it off just | S |
dizzy stunned | U |
by reflection | O |
Bob Hicok
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