Another Awkward Stage Of Convalescence Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: ABCDEF GHIIIJ IKILKM JCILNI OIGNPI GQIRIS TUIJVW XYZA2B2I B2B2PZCB2

Drunk I kissed the moonA
where it stretched on the floorB
I'd removed happiness from a green bottleC
both sipped and gulpedD
just as a river changes its mindE
mostly there was a flood in my mouthF
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because I wanted to love the toasterG
as soon as possible and the toothbrushH
with multi level brisselsI
created by dental science and the wallsI
holding pictures in front of their facesI
to veil the boredom of livingJ
-
fifty years without onceI
turning the other way I wantedK
the halo a cheap beaujolais paintsI
over everything like artists gave the holyL
before perspective was inventedK
and for a moment thought in the glowM
-
of fermented bliss that the bendingJ
of spoons by the will was inevitableC
just as the dark skinned would kissI
the light skinned and those with moneyL
and lakefront homes would openN
their verandas and offer traysI
-
of cucumber sandwiches to the poorO
scuttling along the fringes of their lawnsI
looking for holes in the concertina wireG
Of course I had to share this oceanN
of acceptance and was soon on the phoneP
with a woman from Nogales whose hipsI
-
had gone steady with mine I told herG
I was over her by pretending I was justQ
a friend calling to say the Snow DropsI
had nuzzled through dirt to shakeR
their bells in April wind ThisI
threw her off the scent of my anguishS
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as did the cement mixer of my voice as didT
the long pause during which I memorizedU
her breathing and stared at my toesI
like we were still together readingJ
until out eyes slid from the pageV
and books fell off the bed to poundW
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their applause as our tongues searchedX
each others' body When she saidY
she had to go like a cop telling a bumZ
to move on I began drinking downhillA2
with speed that grew its own speedB2
and fixed on this image with a flagellant'sI
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zeal how she returning to bed cuppedB2
her lover's crotch and whispered notB2
to worry it was no one on the phoneP
and proved again how forgotten I'd becomeZ
while I bent over the cold confessionalC
listened to the night's sole point of honestyB2

Bob Hicok



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