You Feel So Distant Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: ABCBDEBFF GHIJKLBBMNOPQFR BBBNSQTNUFF| I stood still paralyzed | A |
| I can't fathom Was it really you | B |
| It's all so intensified | C |
| I can't feel myself too | B |
| I didn't dare blink away the blur | D |
| in case you disappear | E |
| I was staring at you | B |
| You felt so distant | F |
| I slurred You feel so distant | F |
| - | |
| How did I expect a straight | G |
| path while my life has been | H |
| a disaster so far | I |
| I was afraid | J |
| the silence might let you hear | K |
| my heart break | L |
| And today I couldn't tell you | B |
| 'I am okay' even you knew | B |
| I wasn't indeed | M |
| Not a glance at me | N |
| you retrieved your steps back | O |
| walked away my tears flow | P |
| as you take yourself far away | Q |
| you felt so distant | F |
| at just a feet's distance | R |
| - | |
| This time no running after you | B |
| but not that I didn't want to | B |
| but I couldn't bring myself to | B |
| Either the weather was rainy | N |
| or I was | S |
| You disappeared from the way | Q |
| and I could tell it was raining | T |
| but this time not only me | N |
| but both of us | U |
| He felt so distant | F |
| I whispered You feel so distant | F |
Bhavya Singh
(C) All Rights Reserved. Poem Submitted on 08/11/2023
Poet's note: I wrote this poem to elucidate my immense heart wrenching pain when I lost somebody dear to me. It was almost as excruciating as if my heart ripped out from my chest. the poem's essence is the person said harsh words to me and my teras flew down my cheeks . my expectations of this person being different than anyone else was false, when the person left me and walked away , it broke my hope to stay on the surface. First I weep and alongside the sky rains and the person leaves just the sky and I remain.
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