The Old Timer's Steeplechase Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: ABAABCDCCD EFEEF GHGGH IHIIH BJBBJ KHKKH ILIIL MFMMF JDJJD CHCCH NFNNF KFKKF OHOOH PHPPH BDBBD CHCCH BHBBH OBOOB BHBBH QCQQC RSRMS LTLLU BHBBH

The sheep were shorn and the wool went downA
At the time of our local racingB
And I'd earned a spell I was burnt and brownA
So I rolled my swag for a trip to townA
And a look at the steeplechasingB
Twas rough and ready an uncleared courseC
As rough as the blacks had found itD
With barbed wire fences topped with gorseC
And a water jump that would drown a horseC
And the steeple three times round itD
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There was never a fence the tracks to guardE
Some straggling posts defined 'emF
And the day was hot and the drinking hardE
Till none of the stewards could see a yardE
Before nor yet behind 'emF
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But the bell was rung and the nags were outG
Excepting an old outsiderH
Whose trainer started an awful routG
For his boy had gone on a drinking boutG
And left him without a riderH
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Is there not a man in the crowd he criedI
In the whole of the crowd so cleverH
Is there not one man that will take a rideI
On the old white horse from the Northern sideI
That was bred on the Mooki RiverH
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Twas an old white horse that they called The CowB
And a cow would look well beside himJ
But I was pluckier then than nowB
And I wanted excitement anyhowB
So at last I agreed to ride himJ
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And the trainer said Well he's dreadful slowK
And he hasn't a chance whateverH
But I'm stony broke so it's time to showK
A trick or two that the trainers knowK
Who train by the Mooki RiverH
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The first time round at the further sideI
With the trees and the scrub about youL
Just pull behind them and run out wideI
And then dodge into the scrub and hideI
And let them go round without youL
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At the third time round for the final spinM
With the pace and the dust to blind 'emF
They'll never notice if you chip inM
For the last half mile you'll be sure to winM
And they'll think you raced behind 'emF
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At the water jump you may have to swimJ
He hasn't a hope to clear itD
Unless he skims like the swallows skimJ
At full speed over but not for himJ
He'll never go next or near itD
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But don't you worry just plunge acrossC
For he swims like a well trained setterH
Then hide away in the scrub and gorseC
The rest will be far ahead of courseC
The further ahead the betterH
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You must rush the jumps in the last half roundN
For fear that he might refuse 'emF
He'll try to baulk with you I' be boundN
Take whip and spurs to the mean old houndN
And don't be afraid to use 'emF
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At the final round when the field are slowK
And you are quite fresh to meet 'emF
Sit down and hustle him all you knowK
With the whip and spurs and he'll have to goK
Remember you've got to beat 'emF
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The flag went down and we seemed to flyO
And we made the timbers shiverH
Of the first big fence as the stand dashed byO
And I caught the ring of the trainer's cryO
Go on for the Mooki RiverH
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I jammed him in with a well packed crushP
And recklessly out for slaughterH
Like a living wave over fence and brushP
We swept and swung with a flying rushP
Till we came to the dreaded waterH
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Ha ha I laugh at it now to thinkB
Of the way I contrived to work itD
Shut in amongst them before you'd winkB
He found himself on the water's brinkB
With never a chance to shirk itD
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The thought of the horror he felt beguilesC
The heart of this grizzled roverH
He gave a snort you could hear for milesC
And a spring would have cleared the Channel IslesC
And carried me safely overH
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Then we neared the scrub and I pulled him backB
In the shade where the gum leaves quiverH
And I waited there in the shadows blackB
While the rest of the horses round the trackB
Went on like a rushing riverH
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At the second round as the field swept byO
I saw that the pace was tellingB
But on they thundered and by and byO
As they passed the stand I could hear the cryO
Of the folk in the distance yellingB
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Then the last time round And the hoofbeats rangB
And I said Well it's now or neverH
And out on the heels of the throng I sprangB
And the spurs bit deep and the whipcord sangB
As I rode For the Mooki RiverH
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We raced for home in a cloud of dustQ
And the curses rose in chorusC
'Twas flog and hustle and jump you mustQ
And The Cow ran well but to my disgustQ
There was one got home before usC
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Twas a big black horse that I had not seenR
In the part of the race I'd riddenS
And his coat was cool and his rider cleanR
And I thought that perhaps I had not beenM
The only one that had hiddenS
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And the trainer came with a visage blueL
With rage when the race concludedT
Said he I thought you'd have pulled us throughL
But the man on the black horse planted tooL
And nearer to home than you didU
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Alas to think that those times so gayB
Have vanished and passed for everH
You don't believe in the yarn you sayB
Why man 'twas a matter of every dayB
When we raced on the Mooki RiverH

Banjo Paterson



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