The Deposition Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: ABCDEFGHGIJCKLMNOPQR STUEVWXYZ A2B2CC2PD2E2F2VG2ZDust storm we thought a brown swarm | A |
plugging the lungs or a locust cloud | B |
but this was a collapse a slow sinking | C |
to deeper brown and deeper still like the sky | D |
seen from inside a well as we are lowered down | E |
and the air twisting and tearing at itself | F |
But it was done And the body hung there | G |
like a butchered thing naked and alone | H |
in a sudden hush among the ravaged air | G |
The ankles first slender blood caked | I |
pale in the sullen dark legs broken | J |
below the knees blue bruises smoldering | C |
to black And the spikes We tugged iron | K |
from human flesh that dangled like limbs | L |
not fully hacked from trees nudged | M |
the cross beam from side to side until | N |
the sign that mocked him broke loose | O |
It took all three of us We shouldered the body | P |
to the ground yanked nails from wrists | Q |
more delicate it seemed than a young girl s | R |
but now swollen gnarled black as burnt twigs | S |
The body so heavy for such a small man | T |
was a knot of muscle a batch of cuts | U |
and scratches from the scourging and down | E |
the right side a clotted line of blood | V |
the sour posca clogging his ragged beard | W |
the eyes exploded to a stare that shot | X |
through all of us and still speaks in my dreams | Y |
I know who you are | Z |
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So we began to wash | A2 |
the body wrenching the arms now stiff | B2 |
and twisted to his sides unbending | C |
the ruined legs and sponging off the dirt | C2 |
of the city sweat urine shit all the body | P |
gives from the body laying it out straight | D2 |
on a sheet of linen rank with perfumes | E2 |
so that we could cradle it haul it | F2 |
to the tomb The wind shouted | V |
The foul air thickened I reached over | G2 |
to close the eyes I know who you are | Z |
B H Fairchild
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