Edward, Edward. A Scottish Ballad Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: A BCB DED FCF GEG HCH IEI JCJ KEK LCL MEM NCN NEN ICI OEO P CCC COC CCC COC OCO OOO CCC COC QCQ NON NCN NON OCO OOO

MODERN TRANSLATION original belowA
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'Why does your sword so drip with bloodB
Edward EdwardC
Why does your sword so drip with bloodB
And why so sad are ye O '-
'O I have killed my hawk so goodD
Mother motherE
O I have killed my hawk so goodD
And I had no more but he O '-
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'Your hawk's blood was never so redF
Edward EdwardC
Your hawk s blood was never so redF
My dear son I tell thee O '-
'O I have killed my red roan steedG
Mother motherE
O I have killed my red roan steedG
That once was so fair and free O '-
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'Your steed was old and we have got moreH
Edward EdwardC
Your steed was old and we have got moreH
Some other evil ye fear O '-
'O I have killed my father dearI
Mother motherE
O I have killed my father dearI
Alas and woe is me O '-
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'And what penance will ye suffer for thatJ
Edward EdwardC
And what penance will ye suffer for thatJ
My dear son now tell me O '-
'I'll set my feet in yonder boatK
Mother motherE
I ll set my feet in yonder boatK
And I ll fare over the sea O '-
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'And what will ye do with your towers and your hallsL
Edward EdwardC
And what will ye do with your towers and your hallsL
That were sae fair to see O '-
'I ll let them stand till they down fallM
Mother motherE
I ll let them stand till they down fallM
For here never more may I be O '-
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'And what will ye leave to your children and your wifeN
Edward EdwardC
And what will ye leave to your children and your wifeN
When ye go over the sea O '-
'The world is large let them beg through lifeN
Mother motherE
The world is large let them beg throw lifeN
For them never more will I see O '-
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'And what will ye leave to your own mother dearI
Edward EdwardC
And what will ye leave to your own mother dearI
My dear son now tell me O '-
'The curse of hell from me shall you bearO
Mother motherE
The curse of hell from me shall you bearO
Such counsels you gave to me O '-
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OLD SCOTS VERSIONP
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'Quhy dois zour brand sae drop wi' bluidC
Edward EdwardC
Quhy dois zour brand sae drop wi' bluidC
And quhy sae sad gang zee O '-
'O I hae killed my hauke sae guidC
Mither mitherO
O I hae killed my hauke sae guidC
And I had nae mair bot hee O '-
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'Zour haukis bluid was nevir sae reidC
Edward EdwardC
Zour haukis bluid was never sae reidC
My deir son I tell thee O '-
'O I hae killed my reid roan steidC
Mither mitherO
O I hae killed my reid roan steidC
That erst was sae fair and free O '-
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'Zour steid was auld and ze hae gat mairO
Edward EdwardC
Zour steid was auld and ze hae gat mairO
Sum other dule ze drie O '-
'O I hae killed my fadir deirO
Mither mitherO
O I hae killed my fadir deirO
Alas and wae is mee O '-
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'And quhatten penance wul ze drie for thatC
Edward EdwardC
And quhatten penance will ze drie for thatC
My deir son now tell me O '-
'Ile set my feit in zonder boatC
Mither mitherO
Ile set my feit in zonder boatC
And Ile fare ovir the sea O '-
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'And quhat wul ze doe wi' zour towirs and zour ha'Q
Edward EdwardC
And quhat wull ze doe wi' zour towirs and zour ha'Q
That were sae fair to see O '-
'Ile let thame stand til they doun fa'N
Mither mitherO
Ile let thame stand til they doun fa'N
For here nevir mair maun I bee O '-
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'And quhat wul ze leive to zour bairns and zour wifeN
Edward EdwardC
And quhat wul ze leive to zour bairns and zour wifeN
Quhan ze gang ovir the sea O '-
'The warldis room late them beg throw lifeN
Mither mitherO
The warldis room let them beg throw lifeN
For thame nevir mair wul I see O '-
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'And quhat wul ze leive to zour ain mither deirO
Edward EdwardC
And quhat wul ze leive to zour ain mither deirO
My deir son now tell me O '-
'The curse of hell frae me sall ze beirO
Mither mitherO
The curse of hell frae me sall ze beirO
Sic counseils ze gave to me O '-

Anonymous Olde English



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