Gray-eyed King Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: AB CC DE F GH IG G JE K AA CC LL G GG GG K M N OPEE QQ RQ QQST

Glory to you inescapable painA
The gray eyed king died yesterdayB
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The autumn evening was sultry and redC
My husband returned and quietly saidC
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'You know they brought him back from the huntD
They found his corpse by the old oak treeE
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I pity the queen He was so youngF
In just one night her hair turned white '-
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He found his pipe on the mantelpieceG
And went out to his nighttime shiftH
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I'll go and wake my daughter nowI
I'll look into her little gray eyesG
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While outside the rustling poplars sayG
'Your king is no longer upon this earth '-
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Another translationJ
By Yevgeny BonverE
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The Grey Eyed KingK
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Hail Hail to thee o immovable painA
The young grey eyed king had been yesterday slainA
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This autumnal evening was stuffy and redC
My husband returning had quietly saidC
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'He'd left for his hunting they carried him homeL
They'd found him under the old oak's domeL
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I pity the queen He so young past awayG
During one night her black hair turned to grey '-
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He found his pipe on a warm fire placeG
And quietly left for his usual raceG
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Now my daughter will wake up and riseG
Mother will look in her dear grey eyesG
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And poplars by windows rustle as singK
'Never again will you see your young king '-
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Ilana Weich's translation inM
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Yesterday evening the grey eyed king diedN
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Evening the autumn was glowing and harshO
Husband mine home came calm and so hushP
After the hunting they brought him back hereE
Body was found under old oak so nearE
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Pitied be Queen He was young and so brightQ
Gray turned her hair just after one nightQ
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Searched for his pipe husband of mineR
Went back to work for a very long nightQ
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My little daughter she sleeps very tightQ
I ll wake her to look into lovely gray lightQ
Under the window the trees whisper s softS
Gone is your king from this very worldT

Anna Akhmatova



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