Pointless Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: ABC DEFDD DDG H IDDDDJK LMNOPQRO STUOVW XXSD YAZI

Have you everA
Just sat down one day and thoughtB
About it allC
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Have you ever been so helplessD
Restless and woundedE
Drown in the menses of depressionF
Took a sip from the cup of emptinessD
Drank a whole bottle of fear and unworthinessD
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Found comfort in the hands of darknessD
While tears offered expressionsD
Have you ever felt the need to just screamG
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I DIDH
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That dayI
They prayed for me for usD
They were placed in order and lit in different colorsD
The candlesD
He said speak talk to your God and ancestorsD
Ask for whatever you wantJ
Talk to themK
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All along I thought I was braveL
But I was wrongM
I did not cryN
I screamed and the rain kept pouringO
The fresh soil that was my cheeks burnt RedP
My ears synced to one sharp soundQ
Like that of a machine when the heart finally gives upR
It kept ringing in my ears blocking everythingO
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My heart was in pain literallyS
I felt itT
The sore was too deep and freshU
I kept screamingO
For more than five minutes straightV
I screamed until I could not anymoreW
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Why did I do thatX
Why did I just break down like thatX
Why was my heart in so much agonyS
I had so many why'sD
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I then realizedY
It goes deeperA
There's more to it and I may not know it nowZ
But I will somedayI

Andile Chagi

Poet's note: On this day I was at my lowest, there was a lot going on and I was just so lost and confused.




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