Loch Torridon Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: A BBCDDCEEFEFDDGGHIIHH DJJDJJKKLLMMNNOOPPQQ RRLLSSTTUVRRWXLYWXLY ZXA2B2ZXA2B2C2D2IE2C 2D2IE2ZF2G2RZF2G2RJJ H2H2RRPPTTVVNNRRI2I2 G2G2J2J2RRK2K2G2G2L2 L2M2M2G2G2G2G2L2L2FF TTL2L2N2N2TTG2G2To E H | A |
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The dawn of night more fair than morning rose | B |
Stars hurrying forth on stars as snows on snows | B |
Haste when the wind and winter bid them speed | C |
Vague miles of moorland road behind us lay | D |
Scarce traversed ere the day | D |
Sank and the sun forsook us at our need | C |
Belated Where we thought to have rested rest | E |
Was none for soft Maree's dim quivering breast | E |
Bound round with gracious inland girth of green | F |
And fearless of the wild wave wandering West | E |
Shone shelterless for strangers and unseen | F |
The goal before us lay | D |
Of all our blithe and strange and strenuous day | D |
For when the northering road faced westward when | G |
The dark sharp sudden gorge dropped seaward then | G |
Beneath the stars between the steeps the track | H |
We followed lighted not of moon or sun | I |
And plunging whither none | I |
Might guess while heaven and earth were hoar and black | H |
Seemed even the dim still pass whence none turns back | H |
And through the twilight leftward of the way | D |
And down the dark with many a laugh and leap | J |
The light blithe hill streams shone from scaur to steep | J |
In glittering pride of play | D |
And ever while the night grew great and deep | J |
We felt but saw not what the hills would keep | J |
Sacred awhile from sense of moon or star | K |
And full and far | K |
Beneath us sweet and strange as heaven may be | L |
The sea | L |
The very sea no mountain moulded lake | M |
Whose fluctuant shapeliness is fain to take | M |
Shape from the steadfast shore that rules it round | N |
And only from the storms a casual sound | N |
The sea that harbours in her heart sublime | O |
The supreme heart of music deep as time | O |
And in her spirit strong | P |
The spirit of all imaginable song | P |
Not a whisper or lisp from the waters the skies were not silenter Peace | Q |
Was between them a passionless rapture of respite as soft as release | Q |
Not a sound but a sense that possessed and pervaded with patient delight | R |
The soul and the body clothed round with the comfort of limitless night | R |
Night infinite living adorable loved of the land and the sea | L |
Night mother of mercies who saith to the spirits in prison Be free | L |
And softer than dewfall and kindlier than starlight and keener than wine | S |
Came round us the fragrance of waters the life of the breath of the brine | S |
We saw not we heard not the face or the voice of the waters we knew | T |
By the darkling delight of the wind as the sense of the sea in it grew | T |
By the pulse of the darkness about us enkindled and quickened that here | U |
Unseen and unheard of us surely the goal we had faith in was near | V |
A silence diviner than music a darkness diviner than light | R |
Fulfilled as from heaven with a measureless comfort the measure of night | R |
But never a roof for shelter | W |
And never a sign for guide | X |
Rose doubtful or visible only | L |
And hardly and gladly we heard | Y |
The soft waves whisper and welter | W |
Subdued and allured to subside | X |
By the mild night's magic the lonely | L |
Sweet silence was soothed not stirred | Y |
By the noiseless noise of the gleaming | Z |
Glad ripples that played and sighed | X |
Kissed laughed recoiled and relented | A2 |
Whispered flickered and fled | B2 |
No season was this for dreaming | Z |
How oft with a stormier tide | X |
Had the wrath of the winds been vented | A2 |
On sons of the tribes long dead | B2 |
The tribes whom time and the changes | C2 |
Of things and the stress of doom | D2 |
Have erased and effaced forgotten | I |
As wrecks or weeds of the shore | E2 |
In sight of the stern hill ranges | C2 |
That hardly may change their gloom | D2 |
When the fruits of the years wax rotten | I |
And the seed of them springs no more | E2 |
For the dim strait footway dividing | Z |
The waters that breathed below | F2 |
Led safe to the kindliest of shelters | G2 |
That ever awoke into light | R |
And still in remembrance abiding | Z |
Broods over the stars that glow | F2 |
And the water that eddies and welters | G2 |
The passionate peace of the night | R |
All night long in the world of sleep | J |
Skies and waters were soft and deep | J |
Shadow clothed them and silence made | H2 |
Soundless music of dream and shade | H2 |
All above us the livelong night | R |
Shadow kindled with sense of light | R |
All around us the brief night long | P |
Silence laden with sense of song | P |
Stars and mountains without we knew | T |
Watched and waited the soft night through | T |
All unseen but divined and dear | V |
Thrilled the touch of the sea's breath near | V |
All unheard but alive like sound | N |
Throbbed the sense of the sea's life round | N |
Round us near us in depth and height | R |
Soft as darkness and keen as light | R |
And the dawn leapt in at my casement and there as I rose at my feet | I2 |
No waves of the landlocked waters no lake submissive and sweet | I2 |
Soft slave of the lordly seasons whose breath may loose it or freeze | G2 |
But to left and to right and ahead was the ripple whose pulse is the sea's | G2 |
From the gorge we had travelled by starlight the sunrise winged and aflame | J2 |
Shone large on the live wide wavelets that shuddered with joy as it came | J2 |
As it came and caressed and possessed them till panting and laughing with light | R |
From mountain to mountain the water was kindled and stung to delight | R |
And the grey gaunt heights that embraced and constrained and compelled it were glad | K2 |
And the rampart of rock stark naked that thwarted and barred it was clad | K2 |
With a stern grey splendour of sunrise and scarce had I sprung to the sea | G2 |
When the dawn and the water were wedded the hills and the sky set free | G2 |
The chain of the night was broken the waves that embraced me and smiled | L2 |
And flickered and fawned in the sunlight alive unafraid undefiled | L2 |
Were sweeter to swim in than air though fulfilled with the mounting morn | M2 |
Could be for the birds whose triumph rejoiced that a day was born | M2 |
And a day was arisen indeed for us Years and the changes of years | G2 |
Clothed round with their joys and their sorrows and dead as their hopes and their fears | G2 |
Lie noteless and nameless unlit by remembrance or record of days | G2 |
Worth wonder or memory or cursing or blessing or passion or praise | G2 |
Between us who live and forget not but yearn with delight in it yet | L2 |
And the day we forget not and never may live and may think to forget | L2 |
And the years that were kindlier and fairer and kindled with pleasures as keen | F |
Have eclipsed not with lights or with shadows the light on the face of it seen | F |
For softly and surely as nearer the boat that we gazed from drew | T |
The face of the precipice opened and bade us as birds pass through | T |
And the bark shot sheer to the sea through the strait of the sharp steep cleft | L2 |
The portal that opens with imminent rampires to right and to left | L2 |
Sublime as the sky they darken and strange as a spell struck dream | N2 |
On the world unconfined of the mountains the reign of the sea supreme | N2 |
The kingdom of westward waters wherein when we swam we knew | T |
The waves that we clove were boundless the wind on our brows that blew | T |
Had swept no land and no lake and had warred not on tower or on tree | G2 |
But came on us hard out of heaven and alive with the soul of the sea | G2 |
Algernon Charles Swinburne
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