At Eleusis Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

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Men of Eleusis ye that with long stavesA
Sit in the market houses and speak wordsB
Made sweet with wisdom as the rare wine isC
Thickened with honey and ye sons of theseD
Who in the glad thick streets go up and downE
For pastime or grave traffic or mere chanceF
And all fair women having rings of goldG
On hands or hair and chiefest over theseD
I name you daughters of this man the kingH
Who dipping deep smooth pitchers of pure brassI
Under the bubbled wells till each round lipJ
Stooped with loose gurgle of waters incomingH
Found me an old sick woman lamed and leanK
Beside a growth of builded olive boughsL
Whence multiplied thick song of thick plumed throatsM
Also wet tears filled up my hollow handsN
By reason of my crying into themO
And pitied me for as cold water ranP
And washed the pitchers full from lip to lipJ
So washed both eyes full the strong salt of tearsQ
And ye put water to my mouth made sweetR
With brown hill berries so in time I spokeS
And gathered my loose knees from under meT
Moreover in the broad fair halls this monthU
Have I found space and bountiful abodeV
To please me I Demeter speak of thisW
Who am the mother and the mate of thingsX
For as ill men by drugs or singing wordsB
Shut the doors inward of the narrowed wombY
Like a lock bolted with round iron throughZ
Thus I shut up the body and sweet mouthA2
Of all soft pasture and the tender landB2
So that no seed can enter in by itC2
Though one sow thickly nor some grain get outD2
Past the hard clods men cleave and bite with steelE2
To widen the sealed lips of them for useF2
None of you is there in the peopled streetR
But knows how all the dry drawn furrows acheG2
With no green spot made count of in the blackH2
How the wind finds no comfortable grassI
Nor is assuaged with bud nor breath of herbsI2
And in hot autumn when ye house the stacksJ2
All fields are helpless in the sun all treesD
Stand as a man stripped out of all but skinK2
Nevertheless ye sick have help to getL2
By means and stablished ordinance of GodM2
For God is wiser than a good man isC
But never shall new grass be sweet in earthN2
Till I get righted of my wound and wrongO2
By changing counsel of ill minded ZeusF2
For of all other gods is none save meT
Clothed with like power to build and break the yearP2
I make the lesser green begin when springH
Touches not earth but with one fearful footQ2
And as a careful gilder with grave artR2
Soberly colours and completes the faceS2
Mouth chin and all of some sweet work in stoneT2
I carve the shapes of grass and tender cornU2
And colour the ripe edges and long spikesV2
With the red increase and the grace of goldG
No tradesman in soft wools is cunningerP2
To kill the secret of the fat white fleeceW2
With stains of blue and purple wrought in itC2
Three moons were made and three moons burnt awayX2
While I held journey hither out of CreteR
Comfortless tended by grave HecateR
Whom my wound stung with double iron pointR
For all my face was like a cloth wrung outR
With close and weeping wrinkles and both lidsY2
Sodden with salt continuance of tearsQ
For Hades and the sidelong will of ZeusF2
And that lame wisdom that has writhen feetR
Cunning begotten in the bed of ShameZ2
These three took evil will at me and madeR
Such counsel that when time got wing to flyA3
This Hades out of summer and low fieldsB3
Forced the bright body of PersephoneU2
Out of pure grass where she lying down red flowersC3
Made their sharp little shadows on her sidesD3
Pale heat pale colour on pale maiden fleshE3
And chill water slid over her reddening feetR
Killing the throbs in their soft blood and birdsB
Perched next her elbow and pecking at her hairP2
Stretched their necks more to see her than even to singH
A sharp thing is it I have need to sayX2
For Hades holding both white wrists of hersC3
Unloosed the girdle and with knot by knotR
Bound her between his wheels upon the seatR
Bound her pure body holiest yet and dearP2
To me and God as always clothed aboutR
With blossoms loosened as her knees went downU2
Let fall as she let go of this and thisW
By tens and twenties tumbled to her feetR
White waifs or purple of the pasturageF3
Therefore with only going up and downU2
My feet were wasted and the gracious airP2
To me discomfortable and dun becameZ2
As weak smoke blowing in the under worldR
And finding in the process of ill daysG3
What part had Zeus herein and how as mateR
He coped with Hades yokefellow in sinU2
I set my lips against the meat of godsH3
And drank not neither ate or slept in heavenU2
Nor in the golden greeting of their mouthsI3
Did ear take note of me nor eye at allJ3
Track my feet going in the ways of themO
Like a great fire on some strait slip of landR
Between two washing inlets of wet seaT
That burns the grass up to each lip of beachK3
And strengthens waxing in the growth of windR
So burnt my soul in me at heaven and earthN2
Each way a ruin and a hungry plagueL3
Visible evil nor could any nightR
Put cool between mine eyelids nor the sunU2
With competence of gold fill out my wantR
Yea so my flame burnt up the grass and stonesM3
Shone to the salt white edges of thin seaT
Distempered all the gracious work and madeR
Sick change unseasonable increase of daysG3
And scant avail of seasons for by thisW
The fair gods faint in hollow heaven there comesN3
No taste of burnings of the twofold fatR
To leave their palates smooth nor in their lipsO3
Soft rings of smoke and weak scent wanderingH
All cattle waste and rot and their ill smellP3
Grows alway from the lank unsavoury fleshE3
That no man slays for offering the seaT
And waters moved between the heath and cornU2
Preserve the people of fin twinkling fishQ3
And river flies feed thick upon the smoothR3
But all earth over is no man or birdR
Except the sweet race of the kingfisherP2
That lacks not and is wearied with much lossS3
Meantime the purple inward of the houseT3
Was softened with all grace of scent and soundR
In ear and nostril perfecting my praiseG3
Faint grape flowers and cloven honey cakeG2
And the just grain with dues of the shed saltR
Made me content yet my hand loosened notR
Its gripe upon your harvest all year longO2
While I thus woman muffled in wan fleshE3
And waste externals of a perished faceS2
Preserved the levels of my wrath and loveU3
Patiently ruled and with soft officesV3
Cooled the sharp noons and busied the warm nightsW3
In care of this my choice this child my choiceX3
Triptolemus the king's selected sonU2
That this fair yearlong body which hath grownU2
Strong with strange milk upon the mortal lipJ
And nerved with half a god might so increaseW2
Outside the bulk and the bare scope of manU2
And waxen over large to hold withinU2
Base breath of yours and this impoverished airP2
I might exalt him past the flame of starsY3
The limit and walled reach of the great worldR
Therefore my breast made common to his mouthA2
Immortal savours and the taste whereatR
Twice their hard life strains out the coloured veinsZ3
And twice its brain confirms the narrow shellP3
Also at night unwinding cloth from clothA4
As who unhusks an almond to the whiteR
And pastures curiously the purer tasteR
I bared the gracious limbs and the soft feetR
Unswaddled the weak hands and in mid ashB4
Laid the sweet flesh of either feeble sideR
More tender for impressure of some touchC4
Than wax to any pen and lit aroundR
Fire and made crawl the white worm shapen flameZ2
And leap in little angers spark by sparkD4
At head at once and feet and the faint hairP2
Hissed with rare sprinkles in the closer curlE4
And like scaled oarage of a keen thin fishQ3
In sea water so in pure fire his feetR
Struck out and the flame bit not in his fleshE3
But like a kiss it curled his lip and heatR
Fluttered his eyelids so each night I blewZ
The hot ash red to purge him to full godR
Ill is it when fear hungers in the soulF4
For painful food and chokes thereon being fedR
And ill slant eyes interpret the straight sunU2
But in their scope its white is wried to blackH2
By the queen Metaneira mean I thisW
For with sick wrath upon her lips and heartR
Narrowing with fear the spleenful passagesV3
She thought to thread this web's fine ravel outR
Nor leave her shuttle split in combing itR
Therefore she stole on us and with hard sightR
Peered and stooped close then with pale open mouthA2
As the fire smote her in the eyes betweenU2
Cried and the child's laugh sharply shorteningH
As fire doth under rain fell off the flameZ2
Writhed once all through and died and in thick darkD4
Tears fell from mine on the child's weeping eyesG4
Eyes dispossessed of strong inheritanceH4
And mortal fallen anew Who not the lessI4
From bud of beard to pale grey flower of hairP2
Shall wax vinewise to a lordly vine whose grapesJ4
Bleed the red heavy blood of swoln soft wineU2
Subtle with sharp leaves' intricacy untilK4
Full of white years and blossom of hoary daysG3
I take him perfected for whose one sakeG2
I am thus gracious to the least who standsN
Filleted with white wool and girt uponU2
As he whose prayer endures upon the lipJ
And falls not waste wherefore let sacrificeL4
Burn and run red in all the wider waysG3
Seeing I have sworn by the pale temples' bandR
And poppied hair of gold PersephoneU2
Sad tressed and pleached low down about her browsL
And by the sorrow in her lips and deathM4
Her dumb and mournful mouth d ministerP2
My word for you is eased of its harsh weightR
And doubled with soft promise and your kingH
Triptolemus this Celeus dead and swathedR
Purple and pale for golden burialN4
Shall be your helper in my servicesV3
Dividing earth and reaping fruits thereofU3
In fields where wait well girt well wreathen allJ3
The heavy handed seasons all year throughZ
Saving the choice of warm spear headed grainU2
And stooping sharp to the slant sided shareP2
All beasts that furrow the remeasured landR
With their bowed necks of burden equableN4

Algernon Charles Swinburne



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