At Eleusis Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: ABCDEFGDHIJHKLMNOPJQ RSTUVWXBYZA2B2C2D2E2 F2RG2H2II2J2DK2L2M2C N2O2F2TP2HQ2R2S2T2U2 V2GP2W2C2X2RRRRY2QF2 RZ2RA3B3U2C3D3E3RBP2 HX2C3RRP2RU2WRF3U2P2 Z2RG3RU2H3U2I3J3ORTK 3RN2L3RU2RM3TRG3WN3R O3HP3E3TU2Q3R3RP2S3T 3RG3G2RRO2E3S2U3V3W3 X3U2U2JW2U2U2P2Y3RA2 RZ3P3A4RRRB4RC4RZ2D4 P2E4Q3RE3RZRF4RU2H2W RV3RRRA2U2HZ2D4G4H4I 4P2J4U2K4G3G2NU2JL4G 3RU2LM4P2RHRN4V3U3J3 ZU2P2RN4Men of Eleusis ye that with long staves | A |
Sit in the market houses and speak words | B |
Made sweet with wisdom as the rare wine is | C |
Thickened with honey and ye sons of these | D |
Who in the glad thick streets go up and down | E |
For pastime or grave traffic or mere chance | F |
And all fair women having rings of gold | G |
On hands or hair and chiefest over these | D |
I name you daughters of this man the king | H |
Who dipping deep smooth pitchers of pure brass | I |
Under the bubbled wells till each round lip | J |
Stooped with loose gurgle of waters incoming | H |
Found me an old sick woman lamed and lean | K |
Beside a growth of builded olive boughs | L |
Whence multiplied thick song of thick plumed throats | M |
Also wet tears filled up my hollow hands | N |
By reason of my crying into them | O |
And pitied me for as cold water ran | P |
And washed the pitchers full from lip to lip | J |
So washed both eyes full the strong salt of tears | Q |
And ye put water to my mouth made sweet | R |
With brown hill berries so in time I spoke | S |
And gathered my loose knees from under me | T |
Moreover in the broad fair halls this month | U |
Have I found space and bountiful abode | V |
To please me I Demeter speak of this | W |
Who am the mother and the mate of things | X |
For as ill men by drugs or singing words | B |
Shut the doors inward of the narrowed womb | Y |
Like a lock bolted with round iron through | Z |
Thus I shut up the body and sweet mouth | A2 |
Of all soft pasture and the tender land | B2 |
So that no seed can enter in by it | C2 |
Though one sow thickly nor some grain get out | D2 |
Past the hard clods men cleave and bite with steel | E2 |
To widen the sealed lips of them for use | F2 |
None of you is there in the peopled street | R |
But knows how all the dry drawn furrows ache | G2 |
With no green spot made count of in the black | H2 |
How the wind finds no comfortable grass | I |
Nor is assuaged with bud nor breath of herbs | I2 |
And in hot autumn when ye house the stacks | J2 |
All fields are helpless in the sun all trees | D |
Stand as a man stripped out of all but skin | K2 |
Nevertheless ye sick have help to get | L2 |
By means and stablished ordinance of God | M2 |
For God is wiser than a good man is | C |
But never shall new grass be sweet in earth | N2 |
Till I get righted of my wound and wrong | O2 |
By changing counsel of ill minded Zeus | F2 |
For of all other gods is none save me | T |
Clothed with like power to build and break the year | P2 |
I make the lesser green begin when spring | H |
Touches not earth but with one fearful foot | Q2 |
And as a careful gilder with grave art | R2 |
Soberly colours and completes the face | S2 |
Mouth chin and all of some sweet work in stone | T2 |
I carve the shapes of grass and tender corn | U2 |
And colour the ripe edges and long spikes | V2 |
With the red increase and the grace of gold | G |
No tradesman in soft wools is cunninger | P2 |
To kill the secret of the fat white fleece | W2 |
With stains of blue and purple wrought in it | C2 |
Three moons were made and three moons burnt away | X2 |
While I held journey hither out of Crete | R |
Comfortless tended by grave Hecate | R |
Whom my wound stung with double iron point | R |
For all my face was like a cloth wrung out | R |
With close and weeping wrinkles and both lids | Y2 |
Sodden with salt continuance of tears | Q |
For Hades and the sidelong will of Zeus | F2 |
And that lame wisdom that has writhen feet | R |
Cunning begotten in the bed of Shame | Z2 |
These three took evil will at me and made | R |
Such counsel that when time got wing to fly | A3 |
This Hades out of summer and low fields | B3 |
Forced the bright body of Persephone | U2 |
Out of pure grass where she lying down red flowers | C3 |
Made their sharp little shadows on her sides | D3 |
Pale heat pale colour on pale maiden flesh | E3 |
And chill water slid over her reddening feet | R |
Killing the throbs in their soft blood and birds | B |
Perched next her elbow and pecking at her hair | P2 |
Stretched their necks more to see her than even to sing | H |
A sharp thing is it I have need to say | X2 |
For Hades holding both white wrists of hers | C3 |
Unloosed the girdle and with knot by knot | R |
Bound her between his wheels upon the seat | R |
Bound her pure body holiest yet and dear | P2 |
To me and God as always clothed about | R |
With blossoms loosened as her knees went down | U2 |
Let fall as she let go of this and this | W |
By tens and twenties tumbled to her feet | R |
White waifs or purple of the pasturage | F3 |
Therefore with only going up and down | U2 |
My feet were wasted and the gracious air | P2 |
To me discomfortable and dun became | Z2 |
As weak smoke blowing in the under world | R |
And finding in the process of ill days | G3 |
What part had Zeus herein and how as mate | R |
He coped with Hades yokefellow in sin | U2 |
I set my lips against the meat of gods | H3 |
And drank not neither ate or slept in heaven | U2 |
Nor in the golden greeting of their mouths | I3 |
Did ear take note of me nor eye at all | J3 |
Track my feet going in the ways of them | O |
Like a great fire on some strait slip of land | R |
Between two washing inlets of wet sea | T |
That burns the grass up to each lip of beach | K3 |
And strengthens waxing in the growth of wind | R |
So burnt my soul in me at heaven and earth | N2 |
Each way a ruin and a hungry plague | L3 |
Visible evil nor could any night | R |
Put cool between mine eyelids nor the sun | U2 |
With competence of gold fill out my want | R |
Yea so my flame burnt up the grass and stones | M3 |
Shone to the salt white edges of thin sea | T |
Distempered all the gracious work and made | R |
Sick change unseasonable increase of days | G3 |
And scant avail of seasons for by this | W |
The fair gods faint in hollow heaven there comes | N3 |
No taste of burnings of the twofold fat | R |
To leave their palates smooth nor in their lips | O3 |
Soft rings of smoke and weak scent wandering | H |
All cattle waste and rot and their ill smell | P3 |
Grows alway from the lank unsavoury flesh | E3 |
That no man slays for offering the sea | T |
And waters moved between the heath and corn | U2 |
Preserve the people of fin twinkling fish | Q3 |
And river flies feed thick upon the smooth | R3 |
But all earth over is no man or bird | R |
Except the sweet race of the kingfisher | P2 |
That lacks not and is wearied with much loss | S3 |
Meantime the purple inward of the house | T3 |
Was softened with all grace of scent and sound | R |
In ear and nostril perfecting my praise | G3 |
Faint grape flowers and cloven honey cake | G2 |
And the just grain with dues of the shed salt | R |
Made me content yet my hand loosened not | R |
Its gripe upon your harvest all year long | O2 |
While I thus woman muffled in wan flesh | E3 |
And waste externals of a perished face | S2 |
Preserved the levels of my wrath and love | U3 |
Patiently ruled and with soft offices | V3 |
Cooled the sharp noons and busied the warm nights | W3 |
In care of this my choice this child my choice | X3 |
Triptolemus the king's selected son | U2 |
That this fair yearlong body which hath grown | U2 |
Strong with strange milk upon the mortal lip | J |
And nerved with half a god might so increase | W2 |
Outside the bulk and the bare scope of man | U2 |
And waxen over large to hold within | U2 |
Base breath of yours and this impoverished air | P2 |
I might exalt him past the flame of stars | Y3 |
The limit and walled reach of the great world | R |
Therefore my breast made common to his mouth | A2 |
Immortal savours and the taste whereat | R |
Twice their hard life strains out the coloured veins | Z3 |
And twice its brain confirms the narrow shell | P3 |
Also at night unwinding cloth from cloth | A4 |
As who unhusks an almond to the white | R |
And pastures curiously the purer taste | R |
I bared the gracious limbs and the soft feet | R |
Unswaddled the weak hands and in mid ash | B4 |
Laid the sweet flesh of either feeble side | R |
More tender for impressure of some touch | C4 |
Than wax to any pen and lit around | R |
Fire and made crawl the white worm shapen flame | Z2 |
And leap in little angers spark by spark | D4 |
At head at once and feet and the faint hair | P2 |
Hissed with rare sprinkles in the closer curl | E4 |
And like scaled oarage of a keen thin fish | Q3 |
In sea water so in pure fire his feet | R |
Struck out and the flame bit not in his flesh | E3 |
But like a kiss it curled his lip and heat | R |
Fluttered his eyelids so each night I blew | Z |
The hot ash red to purge him to full god | R |
Ill is it when fear hungers in the soul | F4 |
For painful food and chokes thereon being fed | R |
And ill slant eyes interpret the straight sun | U2 |
But in their scope its white is wried to black | H2 |
By the queen Metaneira mean I this | W |
For with sick wrath upon her lips and heart | R |
Narrowing with fear the spleenful passages | V3 |
She thought to thread this web's fine ravel out | R |
Nor leave her shuttle split in combing it | R |
Therefore she stole on us and with hard sight | R |
Peered and stooped close then with pale open mouth | A2 |
As the fire smote her in the eyes between | U2 |
Cried and the child's laugh sharply shortening | H |
As fire doth under rain fell off the flame | Z2 |
Writhed once all through and died and in thick dark | D4 |
Tears fell from mine on the child's weeping eyes | G4 |
Eyes dispossessed of strong inheritance | H4 |
And mortal fallen anew Who not the less | I4 |
From bud of beard to pale grey flower of hair | P2 |
Shall wax vinewise to a lordly vine whose grapes | J4 |
Bleed the red heavy blood of swoln soft wine | U2 |
Subtle with sharp leaves' intricacy until | K4 |
Full of white years and blossom of hoary days | G3 |
I take him perfected for whose one sake | G2 |
I am thus gracious to the least who stands | N |
Filleted with white wool and girt upon | U2 |
As he whose prayer endures upon the lip | J |
And falls not waste wherefore let sacrifice | L4 |
Burn and run red in all the wider ways | G3 |
Seeing I have sworn by the pale temples' band | R |
And poppied hair of gold Persephone | U2 |
Sad tressed and pleached low down about her brows | L |
And by the sorrow in her lips and death | M4 |
Her dumb and mournful mouth d minister | P2 |
My word for you is eased of its harsh weight | R |
And doubled with soft promise and your king | H |
Triptolemus this Celeus dead and swathed | R |
Purple and pale for golden burial | N4 |
Shall be your helper in my services | V3 |
Dividing earth and reaping fruits thereof | U3 |
In fields where wait well girt well wreathen all | J3 |
The heavy handed seasons all year through | Z |
Saving the choice of warm spear headed grain | U2 |
And stooping sharp to the slant sided share | P2 |
All beasts that furrow the remeasured land | R |
With their bowed necks of burden equable | N4 |
Algernon Charles Swinburne
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