Ten Paces Off Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: AB CBDDDEFGFDHDHIJIK DALALAMAMAFAFDDDD

An open countryA
LAURENCE RABY and FORREST BRIAN AYLMER and PRESCOTB
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ForrestC
I've won the two tosses from PrescotB
Now hear me and hearken and heedD
And pull that vile flower from your waistcoatD
And throw down that beast of a weedD
I'm going to give you the signalE
I gave Harry Hunt at BoulogneF
The morning he met Major BignellG
And shot him as dead as a stoneF
For he must look round on his right handD
To watch the white flutter that stopsH
His aim for it takes off his sight andD
I cough while the handkerchief dropsH
And you keep both eyes on his figureI
Old fellow and don't take them offJ
You've got the sawhandled hair triggerI
You sight him and shoot when I coughK
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Laurence asideD
Though God will never forgive meA
Though men make light of my nameL
Though my sin and my shame outlive meA
I shall not outlast my shameL
The coward does he mean to miss meA
His right hand shakes like a leafM
Shall I live for my friends to hiss meA
Of fools and of knaves the chiefM
Shall I live for my foes to twit meA
He has master'd his nerve againF
He is firm he will surely hit meA
Will he reach the heart or the brainF
One long look eastward and northwardD
One prayer Our Father which artD
And the cough chimes in with the fourth wordD
And I shoot skyward the heartD

Adam Lindsay Gordon



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