If I Were Old Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: ABBACDCDC EFCFCEE

If I were old a broken man and blindA
and one should lead me to Mid Eildon's crestB
and leave me there a little time to restB
sharing the hilltop with the Border windA
the whispering heather and the curlew's cryC
I know the blind dark could not be so deepD
so cruel and clinging but that IC
should see the sunlit curve of Cheviot's steepD
rise blue and friendly on the distant skyC
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There is no darkness God there cannot beE
so heavy as to curtain from my sightF
the beauty of those Border slopes that lieC
far south before me and a love found lightF
would shine upon the slow Tweed loitering byC
with gift of song and silver to the seaE
No dark can ever hide this dear loved land from meE

William Henry Ogilvie



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