Comrades 0' Mine Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: ABABCDCDEFEFGHGHIJIJ KLKL

If I call will you hear me O comrades of mineA
When the sky in the East holds the grey of the dawnB
When the soft wind is stirring the plumes of the pineA
And the shadow goes gliding beneath like a fawnB
If I call will you hear me long ago friendsC
As you pass to the stockyard with bridle on armD
Where the song of the magpie to Heaven ascendsC
And the buddah bush blooms with its delicate charmD
If I call will you hear me Heart calling to heartE
Across the wide water across the long yearsF
In the life that you live have I too not a partE
Do I share not its laughter its hopes and its fearsF
If my saddle hangs idle if no more I bindG
The spurs of adventure to gleam on the heelH
Along Memory's paths may I stray not and findG
The beat of bare hoofs and the jingle of steelH
Where we rode shall I ride not Through scrubs where we racedI
With the rein lying loose as some favourite flewJ
Through the ragged grey stems through the boughs interlacedI
Have ye ridden one ride where I rode not with youJ
If I call will you hear Nay for Time will be kingK
And the wind on wide water bears voices awayL
The spurs as they glisten the hoofs where they ringK
Are the servants of Youth at the dawn of the dayL

William Henry Ogilvie



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