In That Piece Of Jade Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: AB CDE FG HI J K| An orchid blooms in the white snow | A |
| You can not grasp water but it's inside the soil | B |
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| You can't touch fire but it's inside the tree | C |
| You can not catch the wind but it's resting on the | D |
| rock | E |
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| If u let them be they'll exist everywhere | F |
| The faint blue light makes me sigh | G |
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| My white breath turned into snow and tears | H |
| I couldn't let them drop and hid them | I |
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| Despite knowing that they will fill up again | J |
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| Yes am too good a fool who dares ot shade a single tear for a broken empty piece of Jade | K |
Walegu Winnie
(C) All Rights Reserved. Poem Submitted on 12/28/2022
Poet's note: I wrote it for my younger sister Lucy. She has reached a stage of self actualization..her youth.. it's a stage wea she might meet things that seems too precious like jade,..but empty. It means all that glitters ain't gold. The emptiest vessels make the loudest noise. The most precious things in life has the worst outfits and looks risky to pursue.
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