Suicidal Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: AABCD EFGHD IJKL MIN

Falling in the MoonlightA
I'm falling under the MoonlightA
Feel my heart its been beating so slowB
Try to warm it up but its feeling so coldC
He said while slaughtering his will to LiveD
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With a gun in his handE
He shot a dozen mistakes in his mindF
That he made in the pastG
And non of them fulfil his willH
To LiveD
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Failure stress depression I would like to say to youI
On this very hourJ
Thank you for being with meK
Through all those harsh timesL
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I wouldn't be where I am todayM
If it wasn't for youI
My faithful companionsN

Visii Thecreator
(C) All Rights Reserved. Poem Submitted on 02/07/2021

Poet's note: Wrote this poem on the 7th of February 2021, 23:13. Wrote the poem for the readers to "experience" suicide from a victim's perspective.




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