Don't Ask Me, I Will Obviously Lie! Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: AABBCCDDEEFFGGHHIICJ KKLLMM

So ya'll don't stress about tomorrowA
more pain more sorrowA
I'm weak I'm pressured and IB
IB
I can't even elaborate what I want to sayC
I'm scared to live another dayC
I fear what's coming upD
or actually what's not coming upD
I'm cryingE
and my other emotions are dyingE
I should have knownF
that me as a failure would be shownF
I said I am happy by mistakeG
Everything you see was fakeG
Your vision is clearH
your passion has no fearH
but I for one can't deal no moreI
I feel miserable and everything is soreI
Sleepless nights and captivating frightsC
some anxiety every midnightJ
I think about what's nextK
EVERY horrible textK
EVERY bad day to comeL
acting to care for someL
but no I think it's timeM
I give up Is eternal rest a crimeM

Vernique Mapaling
(C) All Rights Reserved. Poem Submitted on 04/25/2021

Poet's note: This poem I wrote when I felt depressed ,anxious, lonely and that nothing was going right in my life.So I left all my feelings on a blank page.I just let the pen do its work and my emotions to flow without thinking but only knowing what I wanted to pen down.I gave my emotions their own voice.




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Fox S: This is so deep, and relatable. I hope you feel better!
 

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