Don't Ask Me, I Will Obviously Lie! Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: AABBCCDDEEFFGGHHIICJ KKLLMMSo ya'll don't stress about tomorrow | A |
more pain more sorrow | A |
I'm weak I'm pressured and I | B |
I | B |
I can't even elaborate what I want to say | C |
I'm scared to live another day | C |
I fear what's coming up | D |
or actually what's not coming up | D |
I'm crying | E |
and my other emotions are dying | E |
I should have known | F |
that me as a failure would be shown | F |
I said I am happy by mistake | G |
Everything you see was fake | G |
Your vision is clear | H |
your passion has no fear | H |
but I for one can't deal no more | I |
I feel miserable and everything is sore | I |
Sleepless nights and captivating frights | C |
some anxiety every midnight | J |
I think about what's next | K |
EVERY horrible text | K |
EVERY bad day to come | L |
acting to care for some | L |
but no I think it's time | M |
I give up Is eternal rest a crime | M |
Vernique Mapaling
(C) All Rights Reserved. Poem Submitted on 04/25/2021
Poet's note: This poem I wrote when I felt depressed ,anxious, lonely and that nothing was going right in my life.So I left all my feelings on a blank page.I just let the pen do its work and my emotions to flow without thinking but only knowing what I wanted to pen down.I gave my emotions their own voice.
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Fox S: This is so deep, and relatable. I hope you feel better!
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