When Their Need Was Mine Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: AABB CCDE FFGG HHII JJKL HHII

I remember the time they called my nameA
A simple text a fleeting flameA
How are you was all they d sayB
And I would rush without delayB
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I gave my hand I gave my allC
I stood to catch them when they d fallC
Their voices rang when storms drew nearD
And I was always standing hereE
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I reached for help I begged I criedF
But silence stood on the other sideF
They turned away they closed their eyesG
And left me lost beneath the skiesG
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But when the time came I had no moreH
My strength was gone my heart was soreH
The How are you that once was saidI
Vanished like echoes left for deadI
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Now I have learned what truth can showJ
That worth is fleeting hearts can goJ
I mattered most when they had needK
But never when it came to meL
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But when the time came I had no moreH
My strength was gone my heart was soreH
The How are you that once was saidI
Vanished like echoes left for deadI

Vanessa Dizon Alvarez
(C) All Rights Reserved. Poem Submitted on 05/03/2026



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